 gimp-dj - Hold Your Breath |
gimp-dj 
DJ-BAKA
Registration Date: 05-01-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Hold Your Breath' and post your comments here!!!
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22-08-2004 15:07 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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Hello ,
i think that the bass synths and terror noises are verry well manipulated. but I think your beats should be more pumping absorbing the noises around it. the beginning is verry good be maybe you should change some drumsounds after the break into heavy distorted ones( just my kind of taste 
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anyway structure s fine and so is the theme it just misses some power.
M. 
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22-08-2004 23:49 |
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BUKC
Producer
Registration Date: 19-01-2004
Posts: 19
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you're a gimp, wicked!! Mate, I like that bit of oldschool vs rough dnb you got going on there, although I think the sinus could be a bit more pumping, and the beats maybe a bit more varied+ more weight on the snares, but overall, I like longtime!!! Good effort mate.
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23-08-2004 23:37 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Vocal is looped for too long and too static in the intro, gets a bit tiring.
Stringlike synth: sounds a bit thing.
Bassline:
The firstone sounds a bit dull and thin, phatten this up a bit man.
Second one sounds very nice.
Both of them are out of key though.
Drums: could use more power, especially when you start using the hoovers (which are nice).
A Samurai-ridecymbal would be nice in this track 
Quite decent start for a track, but still needs work.
2.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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26-08-2004 20:29 |
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