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tryptech 
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Shit dude, sick all the way, this one is the style that made me love dnb in the first place.
Definately big roller
Tuuneee
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21-11-2011 08:52 |
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jeffijoe
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Registration Date: 15-06-2009
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21-11-2011 10:47 |
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tryptech
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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Originally posted by jeffijoe
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Originally posted by tryptech
Shit dude, sick all the way, this one is the style that made me love dnb in the first place.
Definately big roller
Tuuneee
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Cheers bro! Much appreciated! 
Any constructive crit?
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Not much to say now, ive listened it on headphones, it sound very dynamic and sparkly, havent much bad to say bout it. Maybe sub can be little more present, but thats more taste here, and of course heads arent that good for measuring the "subbiness" of a track.
I like it alot
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21-11-2011 11:31 |
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jeffijoe
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Registration Date: 15-06-2009
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Originally posted by tryptech
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Originally posted by jeffijoe
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Originally posted by tryptech
Shit dude, sick all the way, this one is the style that made me love dnb in the first place.
Definately big roller
Tuuneee
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Cheers bro! Much appreciated!
Any constructive crit?
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Not much to say now, ive listened it on headphones, it sound very dynamic and sparkly, havent much bad to say bout it. Maybe sub can be little more present, but thats more taste here, and of course heads arent that good for measuring the "subbiness" of a track.
I like it alot |
Thanks again bro! Motivates me to make more neuro!
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Jeffijoe - Distance EP [CrossBase]
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21-11-2011 12:11 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Not bad at all...
Needs more variation indeed... Make some long bass notes to be played at the end of a bar with some drum variation (like you did just before the drop). Then add some rides or something after 8 bars to get more action into it. Now it sounds like Swedish techno from the nineties (repetitive like hell). You could also use some garbage electro drumbits to add variation to the drums instead.
This tune needs a hook as well, add some weird synth stab that fits with the atmosphere so the tune gets some identity.
The stereo on the pads and atmospheres is a bit extreme.
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21-11-2011 13:55 |
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alternate force
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 23-01-2009
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wow , nice man 
, very dark techy dnb , love the snare , me personal likes repetitiveness but thats cus im and old skool house / rave head so its ok
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21-11-2011 14:45 |
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jeffijoe
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Registration Date: 15-06-2009
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Originally posted by BattleDrone
Not bad at all...
Needs more variation indeed... Make some long bass notes to be played at the end of a bar with some drum variation (like you did just before the drop). Then add some rides or something after 8 bars to get more action into it. Now it sounds like Swedish techno from the nineties (repetitive like hell). You could also use some garbage electro drumbits to add variation to the drums instead.
This tune needs a hook as well, add some weird synth stab that fits with the atmosphere so the tune gets some identity.
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Cant really find any weird sounds that go well with my bass and atmos - I will lower the vol of the atmos as well.
Rides, aaah! Forgot about those xD
Should I remove some bass hits to make room for weird sounds, or wont that matter?
Cheers!
@alternate_force: Thanks bro! Much appreciated! Yeah, some people like repetitiveness - respect.
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Jeffijoe - Distance EP [CrossBase]
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21-11-2011 15:43 |
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recon47
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Intro is dark as shit man, i just know something good is coming.....and you dont dissapoint!
Bass work is tight but i think needs more variation, these type of tunes are crazy with bass chop ups, glitchy things,multiple resamples,insane reese work ect ect.
Needs (as already mentioned) rides in there to work it up.
Drums are tight, mix is clean, master is good too.
Good tune mate
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21-11-2011 20:39 |
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jeffijoe
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Registration Date: 15-06-2009
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Originally posted by recon47
Intro is dark as shit man, i just know something good is coming.....and you dont dissapoint!
Bass work is tight but i think needs more variation, these type of tunes are crazy with bass chop ups, glitchy things,multiple resamples,insane reese work ect ect.
Needs (as already mentioned) rides in there to work it up.
Drums are tight, mix is clean, master is good too.
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Cheers bro! Much appreciated! Will get working on those rides then! And maybe a reese-sweep here and there?
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Jeffijoe - Distance EP [CrossBase]
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24-11-2011 09:18 |
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jeffijoe
xSky
Registration Date: 15-06-2009
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27-11-2011 22:39 |
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Dub Bananez
Dub Bananez
Registration Date: 06-10-2010
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Like the intro and all the sounds used. Very good atmo. The drumz are good and the synth is dope, like the filtering on the bass/synth. Some dope drum patterns as well. Good tune!
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