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biogy 
Tourist
Registration Date: 06-02-2004
Posts: 21
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Please check out my new track 'dimen' and post your comments here!!!
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22-08-2004 14:24 |
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stino
Player
Registration Date: 13-07-2003
Posts: 308
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dark
but sounds a bit messy...
in the end , melody and sub don't match...
nah... try to structurise, get a good main melody and make it fit , make your drums and melodies tight...
too short clip also, this ain't a track...
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23-08-2004 14:04 |
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BUKC
Producer
Registration Date: 19-01-2004
Posts: 19
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Intro's a bit dull mate, maybe try a bit of variation on the cymbals. Get try to give the beats more power, by making the snares more crisp. Also try to get a bit of a flow by using ghostnotes, or better chosen HH's. The main lead after the intro sounds a bit corny mate,
keep it up!!!
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23-08-2004 23:28 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Like the pads u use for the intro. Melody is quite basic thoug
Sound you use @ 0.59 (the pluched strings melody) is offbeat, I think the loop you used is for a lower BPM...
Bassline sound is nice and warm.
Drums are good for an intro, but nothing outstanding.
Drop: like the filtered sound: nicely done, but try alternating filter envelopes to make it less static.
Drums need more power here. Like BUKC said: ghosts and maybe a more punching snare and kick.
Soundquality is quite nice, levels need some work.
Not a bad start, but it still needs some work.
2.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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26-08-2004 20:24 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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