 Charlieb59 - Far East Style |
Charlieb59
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Registration Date: 17-10-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Far East Style' and post your comments here!
NU jump up drum and bass, i know its not amazing but hey, please review and vote!
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07-11-2011 17:28 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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"I know its not amazing"
I know it too.
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 Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there)
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10-11-2011 13:21 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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what the fuck is with that start, you got the synth and bass going in harmony with a "eh" in teh background, no effects on them then you use the 707 drum hits for fake scratches and stops.
this would work as a quirky song if you got a lot of bit distortion on it, like http://www.kunz.corrupt.ch/?Products:VST_TAL-Bitcrusher
and maybe some distortions of other sorts, but as is, it's lacking texture, style, or even character at all.
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11-11-2011 19:08 |
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Rythor1
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Registration Date: 03-08-2011
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This one needs some work man, that little sample in the intro I would get rid of. Drums sound really generic, there just isn't alot going on with the track man, at any given moment there is maybe three elements goin on, you need a pad and some high hats and some melody, keep at it though, peace!
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13-11-2011 03:31 |
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pusha
waveform molester
Registration Date: 07-01-2010
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sounds verymuch like my first attemps when i first got hold of fruity loops , keep on practicing mate
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13-11-2011 16:12 |
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tryptech
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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I love your drums, some sound are a bit squeeky, that sound in the begin that voicy thing, i would let that goo,also now it seems it are like 10 tracks mixed together, it's not coherent. Youve got some nice sounds, just make it onee.
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15-11-2011 13:42 |
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