 shir_pan - War Child (shirpan Remix) |
shir_pan
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Registration Date: 01-02-2011
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Please check out my new track 'War Child (shirpan Remix)' and post your comments here!
current project for hellnegatives rmx comp. tried to put the original more into a deeper liquid style. not too sure about the track thou 
any tips?
cheers & thx
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http://soundcloud.com/shirpan
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06-11-2011 16:04 |
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recon47 
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Good dynamics, intro is nice and sinister, ride is panned too far left, for me should fill the higher space in both ears.
Drop is pretty heavy man and it rolls along well, changes up when im expecting, nothing too drastic,just enough to keep it interesting and keep continuity.
Mix is clean, i feel the drums need to sit a touch more in front of the mix.
Heavy tune.
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06-11-2011 16:22 |
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Rythor1
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Alright man, writing as I listin. Intro has a good dark feel, snare feels a tad loud on the intro, kind of takes away from the atmosphere of the intro. Drop is wicked, bass is rollin nice, agree with Recon about the highs, maybe even have them pan side to side just slightly though. Break at 3:00 is nice. Overall though I really like this track, it would be something I would keep in my mp3 player, really nice work man, peace
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13-11-2011 03:24 |
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shir_pan
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@recon47: thanks for pointing out the ride, fixed it now 
@rythor1: thx for the kind words, gonna check out the intro-snare 
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13-11-2011 12:37 |
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tryptech
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15-11-2011 13:44 |
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psymonics
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Registration Date: 01-12-2011
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Great sounds and love the element of darkness this has. My kind of tune, if it gets me thinking which this does then its good. I like this very much, think its spot on and the best I have heard so far. Very well constructed, well done.
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01-12-2011 19:41 |
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Dub Bananez
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Registration Date: 06-10-2010
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Intro is a little boring. Like the drop, some errie sounds used. The drum are alright, like the patterns and they sound crisp. Nice FX, the sound can use a little more variations. Nice work. Z
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