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Maurex 
Producer
Registration Date: 25-01-2004
Posts: 36
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Man do you need practice more.
The drum is very empty.
The synth is artificial.
1/5.
Big up.
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Brazilian breaks
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21-08-2004 20:04 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
Posts: 11,238
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See you're trying doing ghosts... You need to practice more on that part, but don't give up. Overall your drums lack power. They need to beat and roll more...
Bassline is not that good. The sound is annoying and the melody is quite dull.
The second bassline (first heard around 0.34) is much better, I guess this is a sample? (not that this is bad, don't be afraid of using samples).
When this bassline goes solo, the melodie gets a bit dull too...
Synths: quite good sound
Recording is too loud, clips during the whole track, so watch your levels when recording your next track.
1.5/5
Advice: practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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21-08-2004 20:24 |
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tommy87
Producer
Registration Date: 15-05-2004
Posts: 57
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Originally posted by Surya
See you're trying doing ghosts... You need to practice more on that part, but don't give up. Overall your drums lack power. They need to beat and roll more...
Bassline is not that good. The sound is annoying and the melody is quite dull.
The second bassline (first heard around 0.34) is much better, I guess this is a sample? (not that this is bad, don't be afraid of using samples).
When this bassline goes solo, the melodie gets a bit dull too...
Synths: quite good sound
Recording is too loud, clips during the whole track, so watch your levels when recording your next track.
1.5/5
Advice: practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice practice... |
Thanks for the words of advice surya...I'm an mc after all. I didnt think this tune would get gr8 accliam andit hasn't. No nothing is a sample in tht tune apart from the drums. Im gonna go away for a while and cum back wiv some new skills hopefully 
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25-08-2004 16:59 |
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