 AuroraFlux - Story Of Stomps And Kicks |
AuroraFlux 
AuroraFlux
Registration Date: 13-09-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Story Of Stomps And Kicks' and post your comments here!
i made this track over a few days its a small accumulation of what ive learned from the great feed back ive gotten from this site 
enjoy peeps!!!!
DjAuroraFlux,
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29-10-2011 02:12 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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You are improving indeed.
don't do crazy panning and go easy with the reverb on the drums, they sound muffled because of it.
Work on your structure.
1 minute intro, 1 1/2 minute drop, 30 second breakdown, 1 1/2 minute second drop.
These trumpet like sounds are not helping the tune, use something else and come up with a melody that has a feel, not just BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP.
Still convinced that you are improving!
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29-10-2011 23:57 |
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AuroraFlux
AuroraFlux
Registration Date: 13-09-2011
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thanks man this is probably another really style changing review i have been really lost on my time
and i have a better track than this could i send it to you by email and you give me a review or critique?
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30-10-2011 03:58 |
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pusha
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like the bleepy sound at the start although the melody of it could do with a tad changing sounds like theres a few bleeps out of tune . the saw sound that comes in around 1.25 i would loose man it kinda kills the vibe youve built up it sounds like the theme to the munsters. drums aint bad but kick snare could do with some more layering imo.
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buy the ticket take the ride
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30-10-2011 12:20 |
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AuroraFlux
AuroraFlux
Registration Date: 13-09-2011
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30-10-2011 18:06 |
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NiVofHiR
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Registration Date: 05-11-2011
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Sick brah!
Keep it up.
Epic track!
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05-11-2011 02:43 |
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Charlieb59
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Registration Date: 17-10-2011
Posts: 6
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quite a nice track has quite a old skool feel, but i think the high pitched arcade sounding noise can get quite annoying, other than that i think this is quite good, also i think the bass could be more heavy and maybe add a bit of distortion to it for more oomf but that's just my opinion, i quite like the drum break as it goes nice with the bass. i like the vocal sample i think that fits very well with the track. any way keep up the work you have some good skill. keep at it dont give up!
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07-11-2011 16:41 |
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i hae better tracks if you want to check them out here