 AuroraFlux - Purple Kisses |
BattleDrone 
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Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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You improved compared to your previous tunes.
Like the vocal.
The bass could use some action.
The drums don't roll, use a breakbeat to layer underneath and get that speed up a bit, it seems like you are between dubstep and Dnb now.
I would have picked different instruments.
The vocal needs to be louder and the lead is too loud and should be an octave down (it sound a bit irritating now).
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21-10-2011 09:07 |
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AuroraFlux
AuroraFlux
Registration Date: 13-09-2011
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hey thanx!!!! um i was wondering, im new to this and all and how do you layer a breakbeat underneath? thats been a major prob of mine, trying to get the drums to roll as you said they were not, and yea my tempo is a little low like on the edge of breakbeat and dnb i should fix that =P thanx alot man!
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21-10-2011 15:10 |
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Rythor1
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Registration Date: 03-08-2011
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Whats up man? Opening instruments are slightly harsh, vocal sounds nice though, drums need some work though. Ok, layering drums: the easiest way to do this is to find a sample pack somewhere, if you look you can find them for free or you can go somewhere like Prime Loops and purchase one. Then you just put them into an audio track in your DAW and cut and paste, eq, tempo adjust as needed or whatever to make them fit into the mix. I personally will import these samples into Kontakt and just use very small portions of the sample, usually as ghost snares or extra HH's. The possibilities are endless but try and keep to using your own drum structuring, just use the samples as icing on the cake. Back to the track, mix and master sound pretty good as always, and the track is a definite improvement, keep going man, peace..
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26-10-2011 08:09 |
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recently my stepdad was robbed and shot, in the leg thankfully the people that robbed him tried to shoot him 3 more times but there gun jammed, this experience helped me see how quickly your life could be gone, the night i learned about this happening i finished this track, so i put hella heart in2 it, please enjoy any comments or feed back is well appreciated