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RaidaOne
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Please check out my new track 'Neurofunk Demo' and post your comments here!
Just a Demo.. please suggestions for better sounds 
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keep it up! 
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09-10-2011 17:45 |
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Spectral Pace
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Nice and deep. Like the punchiness in the track. Some sounds are a little too compressed/limited, or at least they sound that way. How have you panned the elements in this project? Are you using mono sounds panned or just stereo files? Too much stereo can really 'crowd' a track. Good effort though.
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09-10-2011 18:56 |
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RaidaOne
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first of all, thanks.
the different hats are panned left and right and the bassline has soe changes in the panning.. but the rest is centered
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keep it up!
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09-10-2011 20:02 |
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Spectral Pace
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OK. With the hats (and most percussion really), convert to mono first and then pan left/right. Otherwise - like I said - you'll get a very crowded mix quite early on (even if you ARE panning and balancing things out as you go). Don't know whether the harsh limiting/compression is on your master out or whether you have applied compression/limiting on purpose, but it results in a very squashed sound.
Also, gating your percussion very slightly (either rhythmic gating or the standard type) will help 'clean up' the samples before you start adding fx - otherwise - if you've got hiss or background noise in a drum break for example - when you add reverb, all the little background noises, hisses etc get reverb on them too and that also leads to a 'crowded' mix. Get the sounds as clean and crisp as you can AND THEN apply your fx.
Waves S1 Imager is a good tool at converting stereo to mono and dblue Glitch is a good rhythmic gater (if you solo number 7). A more conventional gate should be included on your DAW.
All the best.
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09-10-2011 23:49 |
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Rythor1 
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Alright intro is nice and deep, but it could definitely use some more suspense and buildup before the drop. There is a track by Break called Dont look down, check it out and listen to what he does with the reverb right before the break at 1:30, this track would sound sik with a similar technique, check it out you'll see what I mean. main body of the track is soundin real nice great bass work. Definitely finish this one man, great work.
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10-10-2011 05:45 |
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BattleDrone
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Mixdown is very bass heavy.
Snare could use more punch and clarity.
Strings are all on the right.
Has potential!
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10-10-2011 15:05 |
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shir_pan
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liking the bass. not so much the panned synth (maybe its just panned too much a little?). intro could be more exciting with some hats or vocals imo. drums sound quite well, maybe put some fx-stuff in there to make it more interesting. i see the idea here, would really like to hear a finished version.
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10-10-2011 18:25 |
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RaidaOne
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10-10-2011 21:10 |
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jonah1311
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really love the modulating on the
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20-10-2011 12:39 |
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jonah1311
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I really like it overall .since you have only uploaded 1 1/2 minutes of the song i can't really tell what i think about the structure, i would expect some changes after that, otherwise it get's a bit boring. possibly just some changes in the sounddesign of the bass. by the way, i love the modulating of the bass ! what i dont like are the strings in the high freqs, i think they dont really fit well. Or possibly they just stand out of the mix too much. also i think the drop comes in too fast. there's almost no intro, but that's just my taste.
sorry for any grammar fails, i don't speak english too often
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20-10-2011 12:47 |
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