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alternate force 
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Please check out my new track 'Time Slip !!' and post your comments here!
hi there .. tune i made on reason 5 !!
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08-10-2011 18:08 |
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Spectral Pace
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Nice rhythmic intro. Maybe take a bit of hi-end off those delayed cymbals. Beat could use a bit more power. Try raising the kick up 2db. I would bring your cymbals down a bit as they're strangling the dynamics of the snare, or maybe sidechain the snare to the percussion. Switch things up a bit also - the main melody gets a bit repetitive after a while. Good effort man.
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08-10-2011 20:16 |
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SKINLEY
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Lovely vibe from the word go, but I was expecting more variation in the melody. Best word to describe is just nice. Bass could be a little heavier too. Like your beats, but they could do with another layer. Nice work
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09-10-2011 22:44 |
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Rythor1
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Writing as I listen, intro is soundin nice, really good dynamics. Drums are sittin right. little melody that kiks in at 1:10 could be a little louder. Bass could be kicked up a notch.
Track gets kinda repetitive I think due to that main melody that keeps on thruout. Alright melody stops at 3, maybe it coulda broke sooner especially since it comes back in again. Track needs a few more elements to keep it interesting, bring more sounds in and out, that main melody is really overpowering. I think maybe there is a tad too much reverb goin on.
Mix, master and eq are pretty well done, not a bad track.
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10-10-2011 05:02 |
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BattleDrone
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It just doesn't seem to drop before 2:57 and the bass is a bit weird in the drop.
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10-10-2011 15:09 |
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shir_pan
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i like the vibes in this one. the track itself could use some more variation, maybe let some different instruments play the main-theme or change the melody a little at the end of every 8bars or smth. drums sound liquid, they fit the vibe. sub could be a bit louder for me. some nice fx goin on as well. with some work this will be very nice imo 
cheers
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10-10-2011 18:40 |
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Surya
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Very nicely done. The sub could use a slight boost though
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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13-10-2011 08:03 |
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