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shir_pan
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Registration Date: 01-02-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Stalker' and post your comments here!

Another running project...workin on it last 2,3 days, at the moment im quite happy with it, but i guess it needs more work.
im very happy for any kind of advice Wink
cheers

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05-10-2011 20:58
Rythor1 Rythor1 is a male
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Registration Date: 03-08-2011
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Pretty great track man, sample is awesome! Intro sounds are great. Kik feels a little heavy, maybe trade in some of the sub on it for a little more low end on the bassline. Also think the track would benefit from a little more low end reverb on the ambient pad. Great track though, mix and master are lovely, drums and such are real nice. Good work man, peace.....
06-10-2011 12:45
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Pretty repetitive
Needs more low end.
Could do with a good hook.
Has potential.


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07-10-2011 13:49 Homepage of BattleDrone
Spectral Pace
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Registration Date: 19-09-2009
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Nice rhythmic intro. Would maybe deepen and widen your pads in the intro. Love your rising bass sound - and descending bass sound... The vocal sample is also pretty cool. Love the off-beat style. Not enough off-beat tunes are getting made these days, so its nice to hear a good one! Good job man.
08-10-2011 20:36
SKINLEY
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Registration Date: 15-05-2011
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love the intro hats nicely arranged, kick is actually too loud. Nice drop, pretty sweet bass synth too. The bass melody kinda loses its way around 2:00 but the mixdown sounds ok. Nice percussion but it sounds like the quality of samples could be a little better. Overall Nice job
09-10-2011 22:31
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