 AuroraFlux - You Make Me Feel...so Good... |
AuroraFlux 
AuroraFlux
Registration Date: 13-09-2011
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Please check out my new track 'You Make Me Feel...so Good...' and post your comments here!
this track is pure... this is all i must say and can say...please enjoy
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30-09-2011 17:46 |
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Rythor1
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Writing as I listen, intro sounds pretty good, those cymbols could use a little work, don't be afraid to eq these more. I see your using some flat notes and changing key, be careful with this man, it can really Throw a track off. Sample use and drums are strong, these seem to be one of your strong points, really more of a breakbeat track but that's ok. Bass sounds nice. Keep on it man, peace...
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02-10-2011 05:56 |
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pusha
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intro sounds like that old track cars by someone newman i think
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buy the ticket take the ride
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02-10-2011 10:34 |
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AuroraFlux
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totally does!!! just more mellow! thanx!
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03-10-2011 03:00 |
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SKINLEY
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Bit too namby pamby for me, sounds like the coke trunk is about to come round the corner, Merry Christmas! You make me feel... errrm. Too random, just cant get my head round it. I do appreciate you're trying to mix it up and be different but this is its very own genre right here, but not a DNB or dubstep genre I'm afraid.
Sorry man I want you to do well because your overall sound quality and mixdown has been really good over the last 2 tracks. Seriously keep going with it. Your musicality will come iin time.
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03-10-2011 21:25 |
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AuroraFlux
AuroraFlux
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random? uh i guess =s this track has been my top rated track here and publicly but i respect your review 
it is supposed to be a smooth track and not everyone digs that but eh im a beginner =D and thanx for the compliment on my mixing i spend alot of time on it =o
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04-10-2011 05:05 |
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Rythor1
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Alright man gonna try and help you out one more time here. The people that critique your track here represent the masses. If it doesn't do well here it's probably not gonna do well elsewhere. My next to last track got somethin like 36% , so instead of getting offended I went back to the drawing board and busted out a track that's sittin at 82% right now. 50% basically means your track needs serious work. If it doesn't satisfy the DnB addicts here it isn't gonna satisfy any electronic music fans. This site is here to help you develop and improve your skills. If you can't accept and utilize criticism you will never get better. Respect this site and the people who take the time to try and help you out. Just listen to what people say and go back and listen to your track thru their ears, let go of your ego a little bit. You have the talent man put it to work using the help of others, peace out brother
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07-10-2011 10:33 |
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Rythor1
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Oh really you sell dresses? GET THE $%#! outta here man!
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07-10-2011 12:05 |
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AuroraFlux
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your tellin me info i already know =P and y does everyone here think i have an ego I DONT lol maybe its the way i type =s well thanks tho
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07-10-2011 19:36 |
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Spectral Pace
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Spooky pads in intro. I would give them a lot more weight right from the beginning. Those cymbals also sound way too dry. You've got some wide panning going on also and it's quite distracting when listening to the tune as it keeps catching your ear. Nice idea overall though.
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08-10-2011 20:51 |
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Dub Bananez
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Registration Date: 06-10-2010
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Take out the "fell so good" sample and add a little gingle bells/sleigh sample and you have a proper holiday track. After you do that please send me an MP3 I got a Christmas gig I am spinning at. No kidding, nice tune. Z
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15-10-2011 10:54 |
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