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PeteSb 
Producer
Registration Date: 04-08-2010
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Please check out my new track 'Terminal 7' and post your comments here!
Heres another track, this ones more of a jazzy vibe, let me know if your feelin it. The whole track was made using Logic
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=80zGoFyRFMM&feature=related
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29-09-2011 21:45 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Not bad, but it's a bit boring due to it's minimalistic feel.
Your basslines are a bit too loud too.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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30-09-2011 08:03 |
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Rythor1
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Registration Date: 03-08-2011
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Writing as I listen here, track has a great ambience, kik sounds slightly muddy like it just needs a little eq work, drums overall sound pretty good though. Bassline is a little monotonous but its also kind of fitting for this style of track. Track could use a little more varience, like an extra melody comin in at some point. I like the sonar ping sound fits well. Overall a good track though, wouldn't sound out of place on one of those ltj bukem earth albums that were out a while back. Personally think it deserves a higher rating but hey.
Btw, how do you like logic, I'm a cubase user on pc but have always been curious about it?
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02-10-2011 05:46 |
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pusha
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Registration Date: 07-01-2010
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nice track mate feelin it all the way
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buy the ticket take the ride
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02-10-2011 10:35 |
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SKINLEY
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Registration Date: 15-05-2011
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Did you mean all sounds built into logic? The snare needs more body to it maybe even try layering the same snare over itself if you want it to sound as close to the original as possible, bassline is a bit boring and it overpowers the mids too, try low passing it if you havent already. Melodies dont do it for me either I'm afraid.
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03-10-2011 21:17 |
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shir_pan
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Registration Date: 01-02-2011
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kick sounds a bit 'muffled' imo, missin some punch in there. snare sounds quite nice though. after 2 mins it gets little repetetive, id put some variation on this ambience-housish-pad maybe. tune has a nice vibe overall, some nice sounds in there, just needs some more variation imo.
cheers
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06-10-2011 12:32 |
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Spectral Pace
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Registration Date: 19-09-2009
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JAZZY! Like the vibe. Was waiting for a sax to bust in somewhere. Not too keen on the xylaphone/glock (rising and descending sound). Would definitely fatten up that beat and try some other jazzy instruments/sounds in there. Good work man.
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08-10-2011 20:56 |
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