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AuroraFlux 
AuroraFlux
Registration Date: 13-09-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Heartbeat Basslines' and post your comments here!
this a track i made in about eight hours, it has a few problem i noticed after rendering but i decided to just upload a preview b4 i go back and change stuf to get sum ideas on the probs, i simplified my drum patterns since my last track and took the compression off the kick i really hope you enjoy this!!!! any feed back is very appreciated and all reviews will be replied to!!!!
A.Flux
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22-09-2011 19:41 |
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Rythor1
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First off this is a definite improvement over your first track so well done there. Melody is a little off sounding but gives the track a slight scary vibe. Cymbol is a bit too loud and drums sound nice but get a little repetitive along with the one note bassline. Not too big on the heartbeat thing at the beginning and end of the track and the stereo field could use some work. This one still needs work but as I said its a definite improvement, stay on it, peace..
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23-09-2011 02:20 |
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AuroraFlux
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wow everything you said is spot on with my ideas of the problems =D i must be getting better!!! thank you! 
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23-09-2011 05:29 |
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analysiss
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hello there nice little melody,drop needs more impact it just rolls along (sounds like a intro),tune would benefit from more bass and beat switch ups,u need to design a bline so u can drop the melody in n out etc hope this helps.
peace
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23-09-2011 16:16 |
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Surya
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I think you should lower the note of your bassline, or at least reEQ it, now it sits too high in the mix. And it lacks sub.
Your melodies are a bit simplistic and get boring qutie fast.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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24-09-2011 12:52 |
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AuroraFlux
AuroraFlux
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yea my biggest problem is my melodies =/ and the bass to high hmmmm its @ its usual i'll have to check that out! but thanks for the review!!!!
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25-09-2011 03:17 |
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Spectral Pace
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Nice sounds in intro. WHOA, hat too loud. If you've just got pads and a hi-hat playing then the pads need to sound full - maybe add another layer underneath at a lower octave to give a bit of bass to the pads, and then take that out when the beat comes in. Good effort.
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09-10-2011 19:11 |
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