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shir_pan
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Please check out my new track 'Alaska Beach' and post your comments here!
was tryin to combine some melodies in this one, do they fit together? im not too sure about the first part after the drop, if it goes well with the other stuff? thx for feedback!
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20-09-2011 17:42 |
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BattleDrone 
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The bass needs more presence and the mid part could do with a bit of stereo, saturation, reverb, ... to make it more alive. I would have picked a different bass instrument, but this one works.
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20-09-2011 23:01 |
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recon47
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Intro for me is a bit Dry.
Could do with some delay on the main melody followed by a bit of spaciness.
Drop does'nt work mate, i think the bassline notes are good but the sounds dont fit and there a bit out of the blue if you get what i mean?
Needs work man but some good ideas there.
Cheers
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21-09-2011 19:45 |
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tokyotoxvo
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Very nice intro from the start to about :45 seconds. The drop felt awkward to me because of the lack of low end from the bass. The bass had a nice tune but it didn't hit very strongly thus sounding like a lead dropped an octave down. I also noticed an out of place note around the :45-:46 mark. I like the mixture of sounds.
The eq-ing sounds pretty good too me. The drums are on point and have a nice quality to them. Drop at 1:28 is nice and makes sense. Also love the wobble going towards the end combined with the crashes.
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22-09-2011 11:59 |
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Rythor1
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Intro comes along nice, I like the deep kick. Some descent stereo action. The filtered bass needs some more on the high eq to match the clarity of the rest of the track, also seems like the two piano melodies are out of tune a little. Track stays interesting, this one could be quite nice with some work.
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23-09-2011 02:27 |
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Surya
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Decent track, but nothing I get excited about. I don't think it stands out in the crowd.
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24-09-2011 12:41 |
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SKINLEY
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Intro mixdown and samples are fantastic, but the bass synth is too much, the bass melody works, you just need to use a softer synth mate, maybe modify a triangle wave, that tends to work with liquid vibes, just personal preference. the shakers at 1:05 sound a bit scratchy and harsh. Love the bass drops towards the end but just filter the highs a little more, maybe you should try that on the drop too?
The tune itself is superb buddy stick with this one! Nice Job
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03-10-2011 20:09 |
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shir_pan
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06-10-2011 12:18 |
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Spectral Pace
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Tune sounds good man. Like the vibe also. Could do with another vocal sample or some more fx layered over the top. All the best.
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09-10-2011 19:18 |
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gonna pick up workin on this