 DjSlut - Torture Chamber |
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Big Bad Battyman
Registration Date: 15-11-2002
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gonna comment on the tune itself only, crappy speakers here, post sound comments later
it's defo too long
but apart from that it sounds really nice, a big flow of evil hammers smashing the ground.
but shorten it a bit, and bring in some more tightness and small variations in the sounds (just something catchy that fits in some places)
... merely an idea 
but very nice, hard, evil, now i'm gonna listen to it on my big speakers 
btw title's the same as a very popular friction & nu balance track on renegade hardware ... 
might wanna change it ? ... not nescecarely but ...
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16-08-2004 18:21 |
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Dave_Akuma
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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the long intro would be good to start off a set with...but yeah, 10:22 is a bit long, even for dnb...the drums have alot of hi-end on them, maybe a bit too much....i like the synth lines you have here, maybe a bit of variation in either the main synth line itself, or maybe try bringing in another synth/bass sound every once in a while to keep it from getting too monotonous...iti think the drums might be drowning everything out a bit tho, you might wanna re-eq em and adjust the levels a bit...find a way to cut about 2 minutes off of this, and it'll be a solid tune... 
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17-08-2004 01:49 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Nice DARK intro, like that 
Like the bassline and the breaks, good switching.
The sound: a lot of hi end, but where's the rest? Play thisone in Winamp with the spectrum analyser and you'll see that there are huge gaps in your spectrum... Not that the low parts are missing, but the hi-end is obviously a lot louder... smoothen this out.
Good tramen editing though.
Nice how you manage to keep the track intresting without adding any new elements -> very nice!
You could just stop the track after the fade out around 8'... woul make a perfect ending, the part after that is a bit too much... The added effect doesn't really add anything... What I would do is ditch the last part and bring that effect in here and there in the first 8 minutes, but not a lot, just here and there...
One thing is for sure: you're making lots of progress
Keep em coming!
3.25/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound
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- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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18-08-2004 11:09 |
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DjSlut
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 27-08-2003
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Thanks for the comments guys. I shall rework it a bit and definetly shorten the tune. Guess i should change the title as well...
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23-08-2004 18:45 |
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Samoth
Producer
Registration Date: 21-08-2004
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This was the first tune i downloaded from here, mainly cos I liked the name. This is a phat tune, its dark and evil but needs more bass. The drums are f***in excellent, Wish i could make beats like that. Apart from the lack of (sub)bass, its an excellent tune.
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24-08-2004 15:11 |
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Petradex
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Registration Date: 12-08-2004
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Agree with everyone else really, quality tune but it definately needs a lot more sub-bass! I like the stutters youve put on the breaks and all the ambient sounds are pretty cool. Id definately smash this out in my sets if it had that all important BASS! Also I agree with Surya you should definately cut it around the 8min mark. Overall a wicked tune man Iam well impressed with the beat work.
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24-08-2004 18:25 |
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