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Please check out my new track 'Auroraflux - Rigid As F***' and post your comments here!
i made this track in about 6 hours the title tells it all (rigid as F***) i hope you enjoy this and i very very very much appreciate any feedback whatsoever!!
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16-09-2011 19:17 |
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Uberchile
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Pretty crazy intro. Gets a sort of psycho vibe going.
The melodies are not my cup of tea.
The layout of the track isn't very clear either. You could try using windups and FX to build suspense. I would try and play the sample saying 'come on' less times through out the song. Perhaps use delay.
The melody doesn't have to be playing every bar. The bass could come up in the 4th or 8th bar of every few with some higher notes.
Also because the bassline is so continuous it doesn't help you identify how the track is progressing.
Drums have a nice flow to them. The snare seems a bit too short imo. Should be louder against the kicks as well. Would be better to change your beat over a longer period rather than every 2 bars as it would help define the sections better. Perhaps add some ghost snares or perc. Some congas at the back of the mix might fit with this vibe.
Would love to hear the bassline change throughout the song as it seems to be the same two notes for the whole thing. The timbre of your sub is nice though although it feels like there is reverb on the bass. The bass could also be louder on the low end.
Hope this helps.
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16-09-2011 20:21 |
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AuroraFlux
AuroraFlux
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thanks for the review i just startd using this style of drum pattern so eh my melodys are a little off atm plus this was a 6hour track which isnt much in the way of production but thanks for the review!!
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16-09-2011 21:44 |
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Surya
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Oh, those melodies make me incredibly nervous. I found them to be quite annoying.
The sounds you use aren't bad, but they're not great either.
The drums are ok, but are a bit lacking in the high end. Work on the hats a bit more.
Also, your mix is ruined by too much compression.
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17-09-2011 09:42 |
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AuroraFlux
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haha the timber of the bass called for compression, and eh the melodies i love em!!! but thanks for the review btw im 16 and new to this go easy on me xD
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18-09-2011 02:28 |
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modufy
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haha hilarious start... until u get to 20 secs and it still hasnt changed, put something different in there spice it up. drums are nicely done like the pattern. By midway that melody gets a bit tedious, too much high end becomes straining to listen to. sounds like you killed you're dynamic range too by over compressing it. Could also do with a change in the notes of the melody, when thats the focal point of the song you'd want it to be interesting and be going in a sort of direction(speeding up/slowing down the pace, play with sum knobs on the synth, open up a filter make it change sumhow to keep interest in it.
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21-09-2011 20:52 |
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AuroraFlux
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thanx alot! this is probably the best most reasonable advice ive had so far!! im going to try somt of those things! abd btw i dont know why everyone keeps talking about compression i only used it on the kick drum hmmm i'll check out my limiter!!! =s
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22-09-2011 19:34 |
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Spectral Pace
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Love the intro sample. Tune sounds very dissonant in places. Good effort.
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09-10-2011 19:47 |
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