 GiMP-DJ - Bash Your Brains In |
GiMP-DJ 
DJ-BAKA
Registration Date: 05-01-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Bash Your Brains In' and post your comments here!
jump up drum n bass fresh from the lab
sample taken from the shining.
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15-09-2011 20:53 |
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csel
Producer
Registration Date: 07-08-2010
Posts: 61
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16-09-2011 09:15 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Snare is pretty floppy.
The sub is just humming.
The midbasses don't get me jumping up.
Needs work to get it to standards.
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 Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there)
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16-09-2011 11:43 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
Posts: 11,238
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The sub is one constant tone. That becomes boring fast. Bring some dynamics in that!
The drums sound overcompressed to me. In fact, the whole track sounds quite compressed.
Also, the kick is almost inaudible and doesn't have any kick to it.
Structure wise, I found this to be too repetitive.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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16-09-2011 19:28 |
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Rythor1
D.R.U.
Registration Date: 03-08-2011
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+1 to what everyone else said, just needs more variation and dynamic range, that bass kicks in and it feels like its all you hear for the rest of the track. Keep crackin man.
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18-09-2011 05:12 |
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modufy
Producer
Registration Date: 21-09-2011
Posts: 6
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sounds way too overcompressed, and when that happens the transients of your kicks disappear which is usually not good, sure it might be louder but after a while it wont "feel" louder which is what dynamic range does for it. Compare the widget from another track that you like and notice how far teh transients on the kicks poke out and try to get ur song to match.Also the song gets very repetitive after about 1:45 as nothing really changes that much , bassline is the same thing over and over, drums dont have much movement and every now and then u have that vocal come in and then teh drop try changing up the notes or something.
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21-09-2011 21:03 |
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