 Rythor1 - Wasteland |
Rythor1 
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Registration Date: 03-08-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Wasteland' and post your comments here!
Just a preview of the track I've been working on, it's not mastered or anything but let me know what you think, peace...
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09-09-2011 07:15 |
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mattyb
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ooph in a good way! I like the panning effects at the beginning. Some kind of sweep before the first drop would help it come in a bit better. I didn't like the funk guitar lick at the intro but it works well during the main part of the track. Maybe through some flange on the highpassed beat in the intro, crank it up right before the drop. Rolls along nicely with good drum and bass fills, and the added synths later on help keep it interesting. Something I would definately play in a set.
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09-09-2011 21:34 |
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csel
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Registration Date: 07-08-2010
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The atmosphere are awesome man. But that bassline shouldnt change after the drop. Drums are tight and fx are great. keep it up 
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visit my soundcloud y'all http://soundcloud.com/csel
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10-09-2011 02:31 |
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Rythor1
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Thanks guys, I once again spent too much time messin with this one and now I'm just bored and frustrated with it. Is this something that changes with experience? I get so caught up in making the bass or the drums sound right that by the time I start trying to organize everything I'm just tired of it, then I start making last minute changes that probably don't need to happen. Any thoughts on this would be greatly appreciated, keep it up all, big ups to all the people who constantly review tracks and help to keep this site alive, peace...... 
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10-09-2011 04:18 |
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Convolver
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Registration Date: 10-09-2011
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Rad acoustic that rides through the whole clip. Sick electro synth in beginning. Drums coming in on the high frequency sounds rad. With the frequency dropping slowly and the bass coming in with that, I'd say you have it nailed on the head. With the deep voices talking with that delay, reminds me of DLR & Octane. I'd definitely chill to this track or dance with a laid back vibe... it's very dark and yet chilled but still upbeatd, Good Job. The electro synth coming in at about 1:50 is pretty epic. If it's not mastered, you don't have far to go. I like it! I want it.
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The old sage spoke to me: "Go forth with the Fist of Drum & Chi of Bass."
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10-09-2011 19:08 |
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Surya
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Well made, but it didn't it doesn't stand out.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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11-09-2011 11:08 |
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AuroraFlux
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i really love your drum pattern maybe needs a little synth melody or some other instrumental melody, and alot more sub bass, i love the feel tho, not to trance and not to chill, btw what program do you use?
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15-09-2011 19:25 |
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