 RaidaOne - Leap Of Faith |
RaidaOne
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Registration Date: 21-08-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Leap Of Faith' and post your comments here!
New Drum'n'Bass Neurofunk track
check it.
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http://soundcloud.com/raidaone
keep it up! 
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07-09-2011 18:45 |
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mattyb 
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Registration Date: 20-05-2010
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Liking the intro. Could use more sound effects though. The vocal sample sounds really low quality, like you put a mic up to the tv speaker. Synth that comes in around 44 seconds is cool but gets repeatitive. I like the fake drops but you should do something before them to make them less abrupt. The drop is good and the synths but everything seems really muffled. It gets super repeatitive. Sounds like the beginigns of something, your def in the right direction it just needs change ups to keep the listener interested.
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07-09-2011 23:12 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Introsounds are pretty loud,close to clipping at some points.
Drop has way too much compression on the bass.
The triple-drop structure creates the impression that the real drop will be way bigger.
The hi-end of the drums could be a tad clearer.
Track tends to get repetitive.
Second drop could use some more power or new elements right at the drop. It sounds disappointing when it drops because the new element is introduced only after several seconds.
The bass needs filter automation and stuff to keep it interesting for a whole tune.
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08-09-2011 15:12 |
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csel
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Registration Date: 07-08-2010
Posts: 61
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Whoah!!! those bass are mad heavy!!!! Nice syncopation on the synth but maybe the low end could be tone down a bit... but its just my 20cent 
Awesome track man.
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10-09-2011 02:37 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Nice buikdup
Too much compression once it drops 
Kills the vibe
Good work on that bassline
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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10-09-2011 17:34 |
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Rythor1
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Registration Date: 03-08-2011
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Likin the vibe of the track, sample in the beginning could be cleaned up though. Bass work sounds pretty sick, I like all the little breaks and builds. Snare could use some work, this might be a compression issue as pointed out earlier. As a whole the track sounds a bit muddy, all stuff that can be fixed though, good work
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12-09-2011 21:38 |
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this is good track! i like the bass sound
drums are nice! good work
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13-09-2011 22:34 |
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