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simage
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Please check out my new track 'Colours Of The Void' and post your comments here!

Hey!

It's been a while since I last uploaded here, but I really need your help this time.
I made this so far, but I feel like something's missing so I decided to ask for the help of the producercrew Wink

Let me know what you think!

This one's a bit more "liquid"

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06-09-2011 21:24
Rythor1 Rythor1 is a male
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Couple things, the track sounds pretty nice, intro does a good job of pullin you in and the lfo'd synth sounds good. The drums seem a little quiet, feels like the track would be more interesting if they were a tad louder and maybe use some ghost snares in between the main snare hits instead of the shaker type sounds that your using. I also feel that this track would benefit greatly from some sort of female vocal, even just a one note type hit with some reverb or delay effects, I know these aren't that easy to come up with though. There is some potential here though, hope this helps
07-09-2011 06:00
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Don't like the drums before 1:20, they sound very thin and don't flow all that well. Maybe try something different?
Once the drop comes in the drums sound perfect.
Love the vibe in the drop, needs some extra lead or something and a vocal bit.


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07-09-2011 09:29 Homepage of BattleDrone
BBear BBear is a male
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Writing as I listen
I like the intro, very moody, nice atmosphere.
Drums are a little to soft in the mix and, as Battledrone already said, lack punch before the drop. Synth sounds very nice, bass sounds good. The shakers kind of stop the flow of the beat, maybe just ad some hats to keep things going? Some sort of vocals would probably benefit this track a lot.
Keep at it and it will become a fine tune!
07-09-2011 11:30
BBear BBear is a male
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Writing as I listen
I like the intro, very moody, nice atmosphere.
Drums are a little to soft in the mix and, as Battledrone already said, lack punch before the drop. Synth sounds very nice, bass sounds good. The shakers kind of stop the flow of the beat, maybe just ad some hats to keep things going? Some sort of vocals would probably benefit this track a lot.
Keep at it and it will become a fine tune!
07-09-2011 11:30
csel csel is a male
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I think the drums could use more 'light'. You gotta make it pumping Smile Atmospherically... its nice.

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10-09-2011 02:41
Surya Surya is a male
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Nice melodic track.

I do feel the the drums are too tame. Especially the snare is very weak.

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10-09-2011 17:30 Homepage of Surya
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