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Age Break Age Break is a male
Filth is my second name


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Please check out my new track 'Street Lights (wip)' and post your comments here!

hey guysSmile
I gave Drum & Bass a shot again, see what happend.
came up with this mellow-ish tune.
really made me think about looking at the lights I saw at night in the car when I was little.

its really in the early steps of production, working towards the main breakdown atm.

enjoySmile

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01-09-2011 00:19
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Gets a bit repetitive as it is now.
Maybe use a different lead (just a suggestion: distort it and play longer notes) for some chorus effect.
The instruments you picked all sound on the safe side, there's no risk/tension involved.
Overall you produced a great piece of tune, but it just doesn't "bite"... hope that makes sense to you.
Technical side is A OK.

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01-09-2011 09:05 Homepage of BattleDrone
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Really good! loved it.
01-09-2011 10:50
Surya Surya is a male
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Well made track

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01-09-2011 12:19 Homepage of Surya
Age Break Age Break is a male
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Gets a bit repetitive as it is now.
Maybe use a different lead (just a suggestion: distort it and play longer notes) for some chorus effect.
The instruments you picked all sound on the safe side, there's no risk/tension involved.
Overall you produced a great piece of tune, but it just doesn't "bite"... hope that makes sense to you.
Technical side is A OK.


yeah i know what you meanSmile this is just what came out of a "inspiration punch" so to call.

but ill try that thing with the lead, thanks for the review Big Grin

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01-09-2011 15:38
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NIce little tune you've got on the go here mate, the bass synth is fantastic, along with its melody too. Beats sound clean in the mix. Keep going with this one. Have a listen to my latest track PHUNK and let me know what you think pal.

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02-09-2011 12:08
Convolver Convolver is a male
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NICE! Let me know when it's done!!! The high frequency melodic synth in the beginning sounds really good and together with the piano makes the track sound amazing. WOW! The drop is really sick. Your bass so chilled, everything goes together in this track. You're so right with the name for this track too. Your bass reminds me alot of alot of the newer stuff the sound boys are playing at dnb clubs nowadays. This is the kind of track two people culd call "their" track. Very emotional, but at the same time very driving. I'll give it an "A". Nice stuff!

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10-09-2011 19:31 Homepage of Convolver
AuroraFlux AuroraFlux is a male
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ii love how you brought the drums in but tht kick is just really overpowing all the other samples =/ but when the sub bass comes in you kinda get used to it, i feel as tho this track could you use more of an advanced melody but, overall this track is killer, btw up your saw!!!
15-09-2011 19:37 Homepage of AuroraFlux
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