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tryptech 
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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26-08-2011 12:13 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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That half time snare sounds like default FL and isn't all that good. It stands out in a negative way you need a higher pitched snare for this.
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26-08-2011 13:42 |
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BBear
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Registration Date: 18-08-2010
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Like the intro
Nice bass, analogue-style
Maybe the kick can come punching through a little bit more, I like the snare. Vocals can be a tad louder in the mix but sound nice. Maybe slightly less detuning on the piano?
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26-08-2011 14:23 |
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Subkinetik
Cupid Stunt
Registration Date: 24-04-2009
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Sounds very slightly overcompressed and the kick needs beefing up. Drums in general sound a little narrow apart from the impact sound effect. Dont agree with BD on the snare comment but i do feel it sounds a little out of place, maybe a little reverb on it for just the intro? Thats all i can fault it on. Im not a fan of this style of drum n bass but youre definitely onto a winner here. Fix that sterio imaging and kick and youve got potential for a big label with this imo.
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26-08-2011 16:48 |
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shir_pan
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 01-02-2011
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drums could be more upfront imo, except for the snare. melodies fit together quite nice. not too much a fan of those vocals, but thats taste. nice tune overall, a litte fluffy for my taste 
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30-08-2011 01:19 |
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analysiss
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Registration Date: 02-10-2009
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nice tune mate big ups!! wicked sounds,wicked track really feelin this1 keep em comin!!
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31-08-2011 16:43 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Well made. I do feel the snare is overpowering most other things in the mix (that coming from me!) Maybe put a bit more compression on that snare and lower it a tad.
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01-09-2011 08:22 |
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SKINLEY
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Registration Date: 15-05-2011
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It's got a real dub feel to it, where the loops almost seem a tiny bit out of sync? That adds to the mood I think, the tune overall is fantastic, got a hospital thing going on. My only issue is the mixdown, easily sorted tho. I'm sure I can hear a bit of sidechaining going on, you might have overdone it on the snare a little matey.
Good work overall, I'm impressed mate well done!
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02-09-2011 11:46 |
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