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RaidaOne
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Please check out my new track 'Tale' and post your comments here!

After my Laptop was stolen i had to work on my old pc and here is what i have now..

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26-08-2011 00:19
RaidaOne
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cmon

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28-08-2011 13:15
mrtasteytunes mrtasteytunes is a male
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nice man, liking the harshness, could perhaps throw in a high pitch synth every now and then so its not as predictable, but otherwise really nice and good levels

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29-08-2011 12:34 Homepage of mrtasteytunes
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typing whilst listening.

intro synth is ok, melody is ok.

kick/snare sounds very robotic tho..
Like the fx at 1:46

fx and synths drown the drums out.

I would expect very punchy and crunchy SPOR like drums in this type of tune.

Not bad, but needs work on the drums.

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29-08-2011 13:31
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Not bad, but it gets repetitive and sounds a bit empty. It needs more decoration to sound full.
Bass could do with some extra filter variation as well.

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29-08-2011 17:18 Homepage of BattleDrone
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nice intro, can see the idea here. after the drop im rly confused by the panned drums...(or is this my headphones?)
mix sounds a bit muddy, bass programming is nice imo, has potential.
tune needs work, basic idea is good, id first fix the drums, then go for a kickass-tune Wink
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30-08-2011 01:06
RaidaOne
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think its the hats, i panned them first just for fun and forget to repan them
but thanks for reply

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30-08-2011 17:48
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nice intro soundin heavy nice twists in them synths, beats souns nice n punchy,like this track, maybe look into the mix abit and (FINISH) lol id personally bring another melody into this rite on 1.46 cool .peace
31-08-2011 16:50
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Quite irritating sound in the intro, lowpass it a bit more, or use less resonance.

Good drums, nice bassline

Way too much compression though. Everything is squashed Frown

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01-09-2011 08:19 Homepage of Surya
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It's hard to tell the actual quality of the mixdown with all the processing just to get it on this site, but when I compare it to others I've listened to recently, I have to say it's pretty dissappointing. Sounds messy, no real low end from what I can hear? Sounds like you're using volume manipulation rather than a filter, makes it sound a little amateur. Sounds like you know how to put your ideas down, you just need a bit more practice on the mixdown side.
02-09-2011 11:42
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