 Rythor1 - So Wretched |
Rythor1 
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Registration Date: 03-08-2011
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Please check out my new track 'So Wretched' and post your comments here!
Thank you everyone for the great feedback on my last track, this one is more the style I'm tryin to pull off, as always I appreciate any feedback, negative or positive. Keep it up all, peace...
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23-08-2011 09:02 |
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godd
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this track's definitely got potential. i really like the part between 1'36 & 2'18: that vocal sample is sweet! but you need some more variation in the bass, it gets kinda dull after a while.
also, i don't really like the piano-like thingy, it sounds false and a bit hollow.
production is pretty tight though, but perhaps a bit too much sub?
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25-08-2011 16:13 |
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Surya
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Hats are a bit too loud. Drums sound a bit tame.
Filtered bassline is quite nice.
Don't like that whole piano thing you got going on. It sounds cheap and the melodie doesn't go anywhere.
It gets a bit boring towards the end too.
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27-08-2011 09:45 |
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Rythor1
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Thanks for the feedback, I spent too much time messin with this track and kind of edited it to death, this was my first track workin with a vocal sample and I think I forgot about keeping the rest interesting, got another one I'm workin on now and gonna put out a preview in a couple days, look forward to your thoughts on it, thanks again.
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28-08-2011 04:20 |
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Impact
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Registration Date: 29-08-2010
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ez man
typing as I listen..
bass rolls well 
not so fond of the honky tonk style synth over the top tbh.
Like the fx at 0:55.. much better when the synth drops out imo
Nice vocal work @ 1:18 the gating is well done
vocal and bass are the riders for me..
the synth gives the tune a weird vibe.. the bass and vocal give it a dark tone, but the synth makes it all light and fluffy- a weird juxtaposition for me. either go hard or dont. dont mix it 50/50 split
not massively keen on the break, not enough dynamics in play and no real groove.
2nd drop area is better
4:25 much more focused vibe. more of this bit please.
argh- synth came back in.. lol
dirty bass @ 5:10 is working well!
Overall pretty good- the bit @ 5:30 is rolling like hell
but the vibe clash is working against you overall.
Liking the mix too- good dynamic range and well placed stereo field. good job.
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29-08-2011 14:14 |
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