 sAv - People Gonna Wild |
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sAv
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Please check out my new track 'People Gonna Wild' and post your comments here!
an older output i am working on a long time, i am not happy with mastering and all over sound, maybe someone would handle this? always happy about tipps and comments. thx alot
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18-08-2011 03:53 |
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elfeeandlee
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cool. drums need a boost? good samps and baseline
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18-08-2011 04:01 |
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sAv
sAv
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thx man, happy to read those words 
as soon as possible i upload a actualy song
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18-08-2011 13:34 |
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Tuned3f
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I don't know if I like this, nor can I see this going anywhere.
I think the bass needs a lot of work (effects, mastering, etc.) Needs eqing too.
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18-08-2011 16:09 |
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Tuned3f
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The intro is kind of out of place, I just kinda heard it and went wtf? The "a rush" sample made me Laugh pretty hard because at some points it sounds like "huurrr". The german ssample was pretty wierd too lol. The bass needs a lot of work, lots of processing and effects. Drums sound good, but the steady bass that doesn't stop just really brings this down.
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18-08-2011 16:22 |
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sAv
sAv
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ok, pretty thx for time invest, never think about that constant bassline but now, if you say that, you are right ^^ .... damn, i will play around with the used stuff and reupload a new version soon ! thx for comments, its very helpful for me !
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18-08-2011 18:39 |
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BattleDrone
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Not sure what to make of this....
The sub is eating all the space and there's way too much compression on the drums.
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19-08-2011 09:31 |
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recon47
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Low end frequencies will drown out your mix if pushed too hard mate and this im sorry to say is a classic example.
Drop your levels dude and mix everything back in making sure as you push things up in the mix you aint making things dissapear.
Your drums also sound too squashed, like you have put a limiter on them and ragged the crap out of the threshhold.
To get the end result sounding better you need to mix at a lower level, this way when you put a final mastering limiter on at the end they have head room to be pushed and not squashed.
Hope this helps mate, keep going!
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20-08-2011 18:00 |
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Dub Bananez
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Some of the sounds are fighting for space. The snare is smothered. I would solo the sounds in the project to see what can be subtracted or EQ'd to make more space. Play the drumz solo and slowly filter EQ different regions of the bass so you can subtract the reagion that swallowed the drumz up. Z
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21-08-2011 09:44 |
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RaidaOne
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sorry man drums are freakin weak, i would suggest a complete new drumset and try du push the drums with more effects.. not that its overpowered but try to learn how to handle it, theyre boring and bad mastered and sound like 8 bit drums or something..
the bass line is boring too in my opinion, try messin around with some effects and changin resonance and cutoff and so one ..
i wonder if its just overpowered and my soundsystem is too bad but i think you should just work on drums and bassline..
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keep it up! 
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21-08-2011 22:07 |
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sAv
sAv
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heyho,
wow many replys, nice one and thx alot to all!!!!
wanna try def any hints out!
thx alot cya soon!
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22-08-2011 02:45 |
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Surya
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Just sticking that movie sample -or whatever it is- in front of your track doesn't count as an intro. Flesh it out a bit with some FX and percussion samples to make it into a real intro
Drop: I like the groove, but the mastering is horrible. The snare sounds lofi, the hats/rides don't blend with the rest of the beats and the whole thing is overcompressed. Also: I'm missing some ghost snares here
Melodies: don't know, doesn't sound very inspired, just one note following an other, sounds kind of random.
Structure: you defentely need more elements (changes in the drums, new melodic elements) to keep this track interesting, I was bored by the 2 minute mark. After a few minutes you add a couple of other elements but those come too late, I was completely bored by then and no longer cared.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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