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I Am Nowhere
I AM NOWHERE
Registration Date: 02-08-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Abc E' and post your comments here!
new track slightly edited, need some reviews cos i have no idea what im doing (only being doing it a year) please tell me everything about it, thanks!
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15-08-2011 15:39 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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The stab in the drop is WAY too loud, the sub is so simple that it sounds like something went wrong (it's just doing HUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM)
There's no snare drum inm there?????
The vocal is way too silent.
Very repetitive.
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19-08-2011 09:36 |
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I Am Nowhere
I AM NOWHERE
Registration Date: 02-08-2011
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Originally posted by BattleDrone
The stab in the drop is WAY too loud, the sub is so simple that it sounds like something went wrong (it's just doing HUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM)
There's no snare drum inm there?????
The vocal is way too silent.
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Thanks alot for the help man! I have made some changes 
thanks alot!
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19-08-2011 12:18 |
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RaidaOne
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Registration Date: 21-08-2011
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weird intro with weird sounds, but sounds ok till here
but then the drop, or wha ever it should be is so messed up and it sounds so frisky and naive, i think you should really really work on your composition, drums are too loud and does not fit in my opinion, although the melody is not bad, but what you combine with your melody does not fit in anyway, chang the rhythm of the drums, make some bassline and let some patterns or parts fall away like this piercing high bell..
think its unstructured and disgusting
peace out
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keep it up! 
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21-08-2011 22:19 |
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godd
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Registration Date: 15-05-2011
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it starts off pretty nice, i like the dissonant synths in the intro. but the mood gets kinda ruined with that vocal sample the first time at '32.. a smoother transition to the drop would be nice. after the drop, those rhythmic notes are okay, but they would sound better without so many rides accompanying them - makes it sound kinda distorted.
i like it at 1'32 though: feels chaotic and structured at the same time, which is pretty neat.
overall i'd say this track needs a bit more melody or movement, it gets quite boring after a while. it's like your track is constantly building up but in the end it's leading nowhere..
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22-08-2011 15:14 |
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