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shir_pan
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Registration Date: 01-02-2011
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Please check out my new track 'No Title Yet...' and post your comments here!

been workin on this one from time to time during last 2 months, created the sax from like 4-5 different samples, happy for any opinions! cheers!

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10-08-2011 12:36
jeffijoe jeffijoe is a male
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Sax is badass bro, seriously works!

Maybe go for another wawawawa-kinda sound, maybe just keep the sub-bass (with a lil bit of low-mids). Smile

Very nice breaks! Mastering is not bad either! Smile

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10-08-2011 21:18 Homepage of jeffijoe
Surya Surya is a male
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Not really my style, but not bad. It does get a bit repetitive though. Bring in some new melodies to switch things up and keep everything moving.

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11-08-2011 08:17 Homepage of Surya
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
2161... the future.


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snare is a tad too loud, harp thing could be a bit louder. Mid bass could be a tad louder too.
Don't like the main bass too much, cut it off a bit more in the high end, that way it will leave more room for the other stuff in the mid range.
Sax is beautifull.
The track needs more bass action (some different bass sounds, bass a bit more upfront).
This has huge potential...

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12-08-2011 11:03 Homepage of BattleDrone
SKINLEY
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Keep listening to this one, has a beautiful intro. Could do with a bit more variation, but it's sounding good so far mate!
25-08-2011 23:27
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