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I Am Nowhere
I AM NOWHERE
Registration Date: 02-08-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Sandbox' and post your comments here!
one i made, any ideas on how to inprove? thanks very much 
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09-08-2011 20:16 |
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Surya 
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
Posts: 11,238
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Why the hell would you pan your drums all the way to the left? That's fucked up man.
Sorry not really feeling this:
- The track is overloaded with reverb and stuff making the overall sound muddy.
- Some melodies sound out of tune
- The overall volume is too high, it clips slightly.
- Volume for some parts seems uneven (compression?) where it should be constant.
Sorry man, hate to be negative.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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10-08-2011 11:32 |
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shir_pan
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 01-02-2011
Posts: 205
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reviewing on headphones, drums seem to be panned to the left? sounds quite confusing...well, i like the intro-piano, id put more focus on it within the tune. kick could use more punch. not really in love with the synth at .54. track could use some more mixdown overall imo. cheers
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http://soundcloud.com/shirpan
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10-08-2011 11:41 |
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analysiss
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Registration Date: 02-10-2009
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all over the place, take time gettin ur beats to gel together as one- thers sum really harsh frequency's in here- levels all over the place go back to the drawin board, take time on ur beats dont be in such a rush to make a whole song thats no good. soz harsh but u thank me if u listen to my advice n ur beats will sound better instantly,if u can get a vibe with just the beats ur half way ther-goodluck (time to get a drink)
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10-08-2011 14:45 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Too much mid action, clashing all over.
Needs more sub and less mids.
Melodies are a bit simple.
Avoid panning on drums.
Drums have no shuffle, this sounds like an eighties new wave track instead of Dnb.
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12-08-2011 11:05 |
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