 jassummisko - Terminological Landscape |
jassummisko
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Registration Date: 02-01-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Terminological Landscape' and post your comments here!
It has been long since ive finished and released this one. So I thought why not upload it here! This track got pretty high on soundclick. Hope it does the same here (probably not). So yeah...tell me what you think!
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04-08-2011 04:00 |
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Rythor1 
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Not a bad track, the snare is a little deep for the track imo, and the break and build could use some spicin up. The track gets a little repetitive, I think it could benefit greatly from a good melody, a good piano or something like that would sound good in this track. The mix is good, everything thats there sits well. Good track though.
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04-08-2011 05:36 |
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jassummisko
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I agree with you...except the snare....I think its good as it is xD. And also....repetetiveness = Liquid DnB 
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04-08-2011 15:16 |
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doolhoofd
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Definitely needs more melodic elements; piano, flutes, strings, anything. More variation.
Snare sounds fine to me
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.:::GENERATIONS PASS:::.
.:::CIVILISATIONS DIE:::.
.:::THE BLiNK OF AN EYE:::.
.:::IN GALACTIC TIME:::.
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04-08-2011 20:31 |
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jassummisko
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hmmmmm...naaah...piano doesnt fit....flute and strings are just ridiculous in this case
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04-08-2011 21:58 |
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I Am Nowhere
I AM NOWHERE
Registration Date: 02-08-2011
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like the atmospheric start, the drums are really nice as well, i also like the development, however i feel there needs to be a bit more added than just that one atmospheric synth. The drop continues this snth and chord pattern and it does start to get annoying not gonna lie. i feel there needs to bve more added and a little more action, too chilled to be chilled
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05-08-2011 20:22 |
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jassummisko
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05-08-2011 22:41 |
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Surya
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Nice pads in the intro
Pretty standard drums, but they are quite punchy. Quite good. Maybe a tad too loud (man, that coming from me
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Not too fond of the main melody. Doesn't seem to flow naturally, just some notes put together. I also feel that this melody might benefit from being an octave higher, now it kinds of in the same range as the pads.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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08-08-2011 15:25 |
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