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goonybag goonybag is a male
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Please check out my new track 'The Real Dumb (hyphae Remix)' and post your comments here!

Firstly, thanks to those that gave some great critisim on the last track I posted up, I found it to be quite helpful!

Here is a remix I have done of a friends Duo, they are called Jacqui Onasis and are based out of Sydney Australia. This was originally a Hip Hop track, so I took the vocal, completely changed the structure, and composed a dubstep track around it. I m very happy with the outcome, but always keen for some feedback from fresh ears.

Done on my usual setup of Reaper, NI plugins, and my Virus B

Cheers.

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02-08-2011 09:44 Homepage of goonybag
Surya Surya is a male
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The intro is über short, innit?

Basses and beats are fine, but nothing new there.

Well made, but nothing fresh or original, I'm afraid.

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02-08-2011 15:57 Homepage of Surya
goonybag goonybag is a male
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track was made to be pretty short, wasnt going for the typical dubstep structure. May not be all that original, but I have not heard another dubstep track with an Australian MC on it. But then again, I dont listen to Dubstep, so I would not really know what original was as such.

Thanks for your feedback mate Wink

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03-08-2011 00:28 Homepage of goonybag
tryptech tryptech is a male
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Goo dmixdown, really fancy with the mcing gives it that borgore feeling but im also not in to the genre
so

could be bulsshit im sayin here

rspct

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03-08-2011 02:09 Homepage of tryptech
D2o D2o is a male
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Not bad....

Personally the vocal is a little over the place. sometimes it seems loud and sometimes its too quiet.
You need to go in deep and automate the volume on a per-syllable basis.

Like that track though, like the roll out section and the little plonky synth.

oh and i think the snare could do with a more 'real' sounding snare layer

but overal nice work imo Drummer

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03-08-2011 13:33 Homepage of D2o
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