 POOKI - SHAKE THE SHAPE |
POOKI 
Producer
Registration Date: 09-08-2004
Posts: 18
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Please check out my new track 'SHAKE THE SHAPE' and post your comments here!!!
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IM NEW HERE....
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11-08-2004 13:49 |
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-J-
Big Bad Battyman
Registration Date: 15-11-2002
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production is defo very nice, like it very much
just some minor things: intro's way too long, and the drop has this huuuge anticlimax effect cause the break builds up and gets your hopes up for a slamming drop, and then all u get is a beat a bass (i think, i hope so, i don't hear it on these speakers) and the organ stabs
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but quality producin ! definately
just shape it up a bit and it's def ready to roll !!
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It's a spiritual thing !
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11-08-2004 14:24 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Nice intro that tells you right away what kind of track this is: fonky!
Sound is good too.
J is right about the intro being too long though, tighten it up to about 2 minutes or so.
Buildup to the drop is nice. The drop itself is nice too, didn't feel the anti-climax thing, felt quite decent too me.
Like the sub kicking in, too bad you recorded it too loud (it clips)
Good track, but the structure needs work: shorter intro, and maybe add a second drop. You could do some wickid things there 
3.25/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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14-08-2004 18:24 |
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Dee
Tourist
Registration Date: 13-09-2004
Posts: 23
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Not 2 bad at all, it sounds to me as if your trying to make the kinda stuff Good Looking has been trying to push for the past few years..
Keep at it and who knows u might even end up on a StudioX complitation in the near future !
I also came across a few bits of your on the GLR forum and especially like the SCJ track, lovely tune, blows this one away by along shot !
Keep it up over in Aus and drop the Ltj Pooki bit lol
Peace and good luck with the future 
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14-09-2004 06:22 |
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Dee
Tourist
Registration Date: 13-09-2004
Posts: 23
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Excuse the type, heavy on the skunk weed 2nite
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14-09-2004 06:24 |
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