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brucifer 
Making all the tunes your mum loves
Registration Date: 23-10-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Shatter Bones' and post your comments here!
Quick thing I just made using the Beta version of Reason 6
Mastering isn't to great, think I over compressed it...
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01-08-2011 13:02 |
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tryptech
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Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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Dark, mix is kind aof loud i think,needs to be mastered again, could be a good track though
greetz
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01-08-2011 16:19 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Wow, mystery builds...
Drums are indeed overcompressed, esp. snare.
Bass could be louder, overall compression could be a little less.
An extra bass that holds some more madness and some FX and other weirdness could do it to make this into a full length tune.
This has HUGE potential... work it.
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01-08-2011 17:35 |
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Subkinetik
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Sounds very old skooly. personally i feel it needs some hats in there to help it roll a little smoother. How'd u manage to get hold of reason 6 by the way? or did you pay for a previous version?
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01-08-2011 17:39 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
Registration Date: 23-10-2007
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Thanks everyone.
I own Reason, so got selected for the Beta test. Some nice new stuff in it. Only thing is the debug program built into the beta, which is a real drain on cpu, so having to use it at a lower quality rate and be a bit selective with the devices... Roll on September for the real thing 
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02-08-2011 01:25 |
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Surya
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Wow, those are some dirty drums! The snare is a bit sharp
The sub indeed pushes away the rest a bit. I think the bassline needs some reEQing and compressing.
Overall not bad, but nothing special.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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02-08-2011 08:29 |
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tunedup
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Registration Date: 17-04-2011
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no man, sounds good, just say its part of the tunes image, you can get away with it, i like your sample mixing into the song at points.
great, needs a bit of a general master overlay, just finish it, thanx
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03-08-2011 17:38 |
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Impact
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03-08-2011 20:40 |
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I Am Nowhere
I AM NOWHERE
Registration Date: 02-08-2011
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i strangely like this, however, wayyyyyyyyyyy to much compression, something very original, however will have to work on maybe high frequency melodies etc. could do with some melody or pattern in there, as well as this the bass could be enhanced and more filthy to give a realy feel to the song, however the originality of that beat is insane, use it, cos its welllll good!
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05-08-2011 20:26 |
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Dub Bananez
Dub Bananez
Registration Date: 06-10-2010
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The vocals can use some verb to make the into deeper and darker. Like the drumz, they are unique, but can use chops and more layering. The bass is no the most exciting. Cheers.
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