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Astrocyte Astrocyte is a male
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Please check out my new track 'The Hunger' and post your comments here!

Ez all, haven't uploaded anything since 2008 (and that was a disgrace Smile )

Hopefully this sounds better! Bigupz everyone and all comments much appreciated!

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31-07-2011 18:22
Wally D Wally D is a male
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Very good tune overall. I would layer a slightly more crisp kik and snare. They just sound a lil muddy. After that, think its good to go.

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31-07-2011 19:38 Homepage of Wally D
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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You improved a lot...
The break you are using isn't doing the drums any good, I'd leave it out.
Tune get's repetitive after a while.


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31-07-2011 19:58 Homepage of BattleDrone
Astrocyte Astrocyte is a male
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ez dudes, thx for the comments

@BD - hmm, there's 2 breaks layered in there but literally only a couple of hits from each... the rest is my programming. Could you be a bit more specific? Thx man.

And yeah, it IS repetitive/monotonous in 2 sections (imo)... after first drop and after second drop + 32 bars (or so)... I'm workin on it Smile

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31-07-2011 20:08
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Like the intro and the darkness. A little repetitive in places - cld do with changing it up a bit. Good effort with sweeping bass.
31-07-2011 20:37
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Great intro, very theatrical indeed. I think the snare in the drop may need just a very slight layer, the mids are spot on, but lacks a very subtle layer. The growls on the reece are spot on, and move along nicely, sub sits pretty well. Overall, very enjoyable mate.


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01-08-2011 11:44 Homepage of goonybag
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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The "break" I mean is a 4-to-the-floor cowbell kinda thing which is very well known (but I don't know the name of the break just like that).

"The Hunger" funny name for a tune from a Chef Happy

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01-08-2011 13:01 Homepage of BattleDrone
tryptech tryptech is a male
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Very good, sounds like proper darkstep lovely
intro is awesome

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01-08-2011 16:20 Homepage of tryptech
Surya Surya is a male
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Good neuro stuff. Well done.

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Rythor1 Rythor1 is a male
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This track definitely has potential, the opening lead in is pretty cool although I'm not big on the evil laugh sample, these always come off as slightly cheesy to me. The bassline in this track is very nice, as well as the breaks, very good work there. One thing I felt that was lacking a little was the drums, I think they would definitely benefit from some ghost snares or extra high hat hits, just to bring them out in the track a little more. Also the filter sweeps in the end of the track sound like they could use a little resonance to make them a bit more interesting, maybe even draw them out alittle longer as well. Overall a pretty nice track though, well done.
03-08-2011 15:13
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Really like your sound and style. Ever hear the tune by "B-Complex- Out of the box" Your intro shocked me in how simular it was. The song is no longer on online, I used to drop it on the dancefloor when spinning out; if you like I would be happy to send it to you. I had to dig back to 2006 to find the song, I ended up playing them at the same time and the intro on both almost matched completely same tempo and keys. Love the bass and the different synths, they are used in the right spots. Your drumz are solid with good patterns. Great tune. I would like an MP3 if you got a sec. to send it to me. Thanks.

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07-08-2011 11:39 Homepage of Dub Bananez
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quote:
Originally posted by BattleDrone
The "break" I mean is a 4-to-the-floor cowbell kinda thing which is very well known (but I don't know the name of the break just like that).

"The Hunger" funny name for a tune from a Chef Happy


You are too funny brutha Kiss

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07-08-2011 11:43 Homepage of Dub Bananez
Astrocyte Astrocyte is a male
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Thx for the feedback everyone, much appreciated!
Still working away at it.

@Dub Bananez - Thanks for that, never heard that tune, spookily similar intro!

I've PM'd ya on Soundcloud btw

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07-08-2011 14:23
Astrocyte Astrocyte is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by BattleDrone
The "break" I mean is a 4-to-the-floor cowbell kinda thing which is very well known (but I don't know the name of the break just like that).

"The Hunger" funny name for a tune from a Chef Happy


Yeah I removed that break.

ROFL I hadn't even made that connection myself, classic!

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07-08-2011 14:25
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