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Alyiann
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Registration Date: 12-03-2011
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Please check out my new track sharpen yourself and post your comments here!
Hello!
It's my newest attempt in dubstep music.
I hope you will like it
I'll be appreciate for your feedback!!!
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27-07-2011 16:22 |
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Surya 
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Good tune.
I like how the snare sounds in the intro with all that reverb. But once it drops, I think you should layer it with a more dry, punchy sample, now it kind of drowns in the mix.
Also, your leads are a bit too up front in the mix.
The switch to DnB is unexpected. It's ok, but here to the drums drown in the mix a bit.
Remaster a bit, and do something about that snare 
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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27-07-2011 16:44 |
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diego018
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Registration Date: 27-07-2011
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I love how hard is the kick, and the snare is great. The lead sounds are too high in the mix, and maybe too many highs in the eq of the lead sounds in the dubstep.
The drum & bass part needs to be synced with the dubstep part, the unexpected change is a little off.
However im just a begineer in this, dont take me too seriously. 
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27-07-2011 17:51 |
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Alyiann
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Registration Date: 12-03-2011
Posts: 20
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Wow, i didn't expected that it's just need better mastering
. Thanks for feedback .
Hmmm maybe dnb part didn't fit couse i rednered it to mp3 and put to the direct project as a audioclip . I don't know it im still a rookie , maybe i'll try go with some spectrum analyzers on master or something and that could help.
Thank you guys, I'm very appreciate
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27-07-2011 19:03 |
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