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goonybag 
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Please check out my new track 'Memory Dump' and post your comments here!
First dnb track ive done in about 2 years, so defo keen for some feedback! Made in Reaper, with Kontakt, Massive, Battery, and Virus B. A few elements im unsure about but will keep quiet on them to see if anyone else agrees.
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26-07-2011 09:12 |
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Surya
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Decent intro, good drums.
I'd add some slight distortion to those synth stabs.
Good drop, but missing some punchy ghost snares/kicks in the break. Also, the drums are getting slightly lost in the mix, re-eq the whole thing a bit or boost the drums slightly.
Maybe add a few more changeups to the bassline. I think a bass drop would work great.
Vocal is a bit loud and I'm not sure it fits with the track.
Nice drumroll before that second drop.
Good track, but it needs some more work.
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26-07-2011 09:35 |
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goonybag
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Thanks for the feed Surya, appreciated and noted mate!
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26-07-2011 09:38 |
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Quaibiqz
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This is very cool stuff, reminds me of renegade hardware alot. Maybe you could even think about submitting it to them. Love the tweaking on this. Think you got the sounds just right for the style.
Drums tweaked just right again, and quite addictive and head nodding. Maybe the only thing it needs is a bit more of a breakdown but then again this is a flat-out style track so it might actually detract from it. The mastering perhaps could have used a little more bass but perhaps thats just the quality of the audio file. Good work i think you could definately get heard.
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29-07-2011 02:25 |
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goonybag
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cheers for the feedback mate, I hear you on the mastering side of things, mastering has always been a weakness of mine, probably will go back and tweak the bass on my multiband compressor a bit, its still a bit of a work in progress.
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29-07-2011 05:06 |
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BattleDrone
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The high arpeggio synth sounds a bit happy hardcore to me, would use a different sound.
Bass line gets a bit repetitive.
Vocal in breakdown doesn't work, too many new elements in the breakdown.
The second drop sounds too different, not a fan of the main bass in there.
All in all a good tune, but not killer.
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31-07-2011 15:32 |
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goonybag
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thanks for listening bdrone, I appreciate your feedback.
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02-08-2011 05:37 |
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