Please check out my new track 'Runnin' Demo' and post your comments here!
It's been a while since i've posted or commented on anything. I moved a few weeks ago from Boston to Portland, Or. so everything's been chaotic. Anywho here's the beginings of a new tune. I think it's pretty solid.
Drums have strength, would maybe like to hear a couple of more elements in the intro, some fx and stuff maybe? I think the drop may also need a little more impact, maybe take the main synth/ bass line in a completely different direction to really trip the listener out and hit them hard. The whole track seems to follow the same synth pattern over and over, would love to hear a second drop, especially in a track that goes for 6 minutes. Production and mix balance is good.
like what u did with the drums in the beginning.
the piano could use some more umpf to it imo.
nice buildup towards drop.
love the sample u got running under there, really keep it flowing.
maybe to try a counter melodie, when that synth kicks in that plays along.
like the pitch down part, great job on that.
ecited to hear the end result of this
good job
Thanks. I have a tendency to get repeatitive. I'm gonna try to stick with this one and make in to somethign good(i say that a lot and it usually doesn't happen.) The second one I put on soundcloud has some amen fills and some different bass parts.
"the beginings of a new tune" --> 6:39!!!
The drop sounds ok, but it's a bit of a jelly, with the melody following the bass.
Melodies aren't the kind that are entertaining enough to last 6:39.
Cut off atleast a minute (make that 90 seconds).
Pick some more unusual sounds.
Make the bass stand out (it's not called Drum'n Lead). Make a bassline that lasts 4 bars and add some variations This sounds like a pop rock band.
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I really like this track a a lot man. Drums sound pretty solid, and everything sits pretty well. The spot where the reece in the first build pitches up sounds a little off, maybe work something there, maybe even try pitching it and the lfo speed down, kinda like on the second little break. The melody that kicks in gets a little monotonous, maybe put some sort of filter automation or something on it. Overall an excellent track though, can't wait to here the final.
Intro can use a little developing. Maybe try to create a theme and use some sounds to paint a picture. Bass is alright. Like the drum patterns. Overall it's a decent song, just needs a theme/hook.
