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freddy reeks freddy reeks is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Untitled' and post your comments here!

Just wondering what any1 thinks of this. Not sure how I feel bout it really. Intro reminds me of the film Preditor with arnie so the name will prob b based around that. Some advice would be helpfull.
27-06-2011 15:39
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The hihat in the intro sounds very robotic. When the other drums come in this sounds way better.
Don't use extreme panning on the ghosthits.
The pads are too loud and have a bit too much lo-end. The end of the intro drums sounds a bit weird.
At 1:25 some sick tearing bass comes in and I was like "O YES this is going to be sick" but then you continue to have an intro going on for quite a while. After hearing the whole tune I wonder what you were doing with this sick bass.
The stormy sound at the end of the intro is panned too much. Like the dark atmosphere. Bass sound at 1:55 isn't working (too thin).
Intro is way too long.

Like the drop, mixdown/mastering needs work because the panning and reverb settings make this tune sound like a collection of samples rather than a tune. After 4:30 the tune seems to go extinct slowly.

More subtle panning would do good, shorten intro.

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freddy reeks freddy reeks is a male
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When u say 'extreme panning on ghost hits' what do u mean by the ghost hits? I wanted 2 maby put that sik bass in after the drop at the end of a bar 2 seperate things a little but it sounded weird doin that! I c wot u mean bout other suff tho.
27-06-2011 16:13
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Like the sounds of the drums, nice in balance but could use some twisting edits every 16th or so...
Imho some of the bass and reeces are too lo-fi in compare f the rest. flange or phase or bitcrush or ... those

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