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Surya 
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intresting snares 
Kick could use a bit more mid
Some strings (the high ones) are out of key a bit
Bassline: told you before what I think about them. Give them a boost though, they aren't very auditable...
The leadsounds are nice, and they don't sound shorter anymore with the drums going on. But they're quite loud. Turn them down a bit.
As for cutting them away: wouldn't it be nice to do it with a LP filter going down?
Once the track has dropped, you've essentially heard it though. From there on it just cuts away and back a bit... resulting in being a bit repetetive, which is a pity, coz you got a good setup for a possibly great track. Not it's just a good idear executed poorly.
2.75/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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hey man thanks a lot...im deff gonna keep working on it...little things here and there...and ill keep the repetive thing in mind...ill try to add something new...thanks again 
any new suggestions though as far as melodies and what not?
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10-08-2004 19:12 |
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Surya
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Not really. Try out some stuff, maybe something magic happens 
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T.roll
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Registration Date: 23-06-2004
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No sub at all. Agree with Surya about bassline. Imho you sould also do something with main drum... maybe change the sample 'cause this one sounds a bit trancy and doesn't comply with DNB (imho of course). Leading synth are nice, but i would lower them by octave.
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Breaks: Deal with main drum, maybe add more detail to snares.
Bassline: Hardly hearable, no sub, and pretty simple. Try to use some Blood Override effect or Distortion or something, if you use FLStudio the BassBoost is very useful.
Leading: Nice melody, but as i said i would lower it an octave, and fill with some effects. Simple Phaser does the trick.
Structure: Nice, but not finished imho. I would use some dumrolls at the end of drops etc. For now it's too straight.
Mastering: I have a feeling you didn't bother, am i right?
Boost low freq's from 55 to 90 hz, high and high mid from 3khz to 16 khz. Use spectrum analyzer to see wich freq u have to mange.
Result:
Idea: 4 (pretty light not really my style)
Production: 3- (good base, add more details)
Mastering: 1 (sorry, bad mastering ruins everething 
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Soundquality: 4 (can't really judge that, at least nothing heart's my ears 
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Rate: 3- for now, keep on working
Hope this review will help somehow. Of course everething i said is only my feel.
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14-08-2004 23:48 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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thanks, it helped a lot..from both of you...
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