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biogy
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Registration Date: 06-02-2004
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Please check out my new track 'first steps' and post your comments here!!!
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08-08-2004 23:13 |
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CHALLENJA
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Registration Date: 25-07-2004
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nice opening. i would boost the vocal at the first transfer point. it sounds too low in the mix. a bit muddled. ussing skratching eh? havent heard this in light years. reminds me a bit of a the old skool track "far out". The track needs another dope hard synth stab or something to keep it running and interesting ,but the track does have flow.
james
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09-08-2004 22:28 |
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Surya
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Nice pads in the intro
Filtered drums and conga's are nice too, good buildup
Vocal is loud enough, but maybe give it a tad more hi mid and less low mid, to make it more auditable
Bassline kicking in: nice.
Drop: drums are good, but a some ghosts would be nice! They need some more hi-end too them too, especially the hihats.
Good start for a track, but it needs some work. Intro is very good, you can leave that how it is (structurewise).
2.5/5
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10-08-2004 15:18 |
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T.roll
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Really like this one!
Can't really judge a production quality right now 'cause listening with cheap speekers. Will do this later. Intro is really nice as Surya said. Like how you bring the kick in at 2:05. Snare could be a bit more snappy with more hi-mid range. Also boost high freq's aa little
Filtered bassline is nice. Damn I want to make a remix on it. Your word? What software you are producing in?
Rate 4- of 5
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10-08-2004 19:45 |
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biogy
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reason 2.5
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11-08-2004 23:47 |
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hedset
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this song is cool, nice beat, the bass has a "night driving" theme to it which i like and a cool intro. but the scratching its kinda alright, but good track overall.
i gives it a 3
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12-08-2004 05:21 |
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T.roll
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I use FL
Dunno is it posible to export Reason samplepack?
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12-08-2004 09:34 |
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Dee
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Registration Date: 13-09-2004
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Its not possible to do that but if u use Cubase then you can rewire Reason and also run Fruityloops as a vsti !
If you want to use Reason samples in fruity then you will have to export each individual sound that you want from Reason, then u will have them in wav format and can then use them in fruity, but if u really want to get the most out of these apps then i suggest Cubase rewired with Reason and run fruityloops as a vsti which will allow infinite possibilities !
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15-09-2004 05:42 |
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charleskoncept
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Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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nice bongos to start off, they really offset the snare which is nice.
the pads(?) are a little warm for the vocals but they fit too.
nice transfer and very moving, i think the scratching could be brought to the front so to speak, the bassline is very strong and sustaining.
i think a nice amen break would set the track off just right imo, but it is my opinion
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01-10-2004 03:03 |
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Surora23
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i wouldnt worry about wrigin through reason in FL...its a waste of time...Reason is too compicated...and it takes a lot of patients...ad for the track...the intro is good...and i like the dark bass pad you have but as for as the bouncing bassline...ehhhh i dont really liek that imo...its so random out of the rest of the track...i was expectong some tech-step..and the scratching doesnt fit well in my opioni...thats more stuitable for a nuerofunk track...needs a lot of work i think...
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01-10-2004 04:39 |
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