drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Razorcut - Industrial Offence Razorcut - Industrial Offence Author Post Razorcut Producer Registration Date: 04-08-2004 Posts: 19 Please check out my new track 'Industrial Offence' and post your comments here!!! 08-08-2004 13:51 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  Your filtered sub in the intro is too loud Drums: snare is nice, kick needs to be a bit louder. Hats need more hi-end. Drop: doesn't work. You go a bit too loud just before it, and the reece should be louder with more bass. It sounds too thin now. Good efford, but you need to work on balance in your song. Some sounds really stick out, others need a boost. Some have good soundquality, others needs a lot of EQ work. For the structure: not bad, but nothing spectacular. 2.25/5 __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 10-08-2004 14:55 stickbubbly mad man Registration Date: 16-09-2004 Posts: 377 Helpfulness rating:  not bad. your drums sound light. you need alot more stuff going on. nice dark bass and clean samples. 17-09-2004 15:01 M.O.A.B. Producer Registration Date: 22-04-2003 Posts: 53 I like this tune, especially the effect on the drumz at 1.18. Most of the sounds are good, like the sample b4 the drop. Drumz need to be a bit heavier. Definatly some potential here, keep em comin' 20-09-2004 17:09 marisol Steppa Registration Date: 23-09-2004 Posts: 279 Helpfulness rating:  tight structure just drop the volume on those proggramed drums and let the bass pump. you got some heavey phasing problems. try tuning the drums a bit to relieve that. you also might be able to boost the b line with some type of multiband compression or use layered sub and mid sounds to acompany the bass. i not sure what you have compressed already if any at all but some heavy tuning is in order for this one. good structure going on just work on ya mixdowns. 23-09-2004 23:05 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Razorcut - Industrial Offence