 amptek - Lost In Your Game |
amptek 
Jan Amparo
Registration Date: 04-08-2010
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Please check out my new track 'Lost In Your Game' and post your comments here!
I took some advice and tips from the last reviews for this tune and applied it for this new version.
I hope this one flows better than the old version.
Again, this wasn't meant for dancing but can still be grooved to. I was trying to tell a story in a way.
Enjoy!!
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02-06-2011 21:12 |
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SKINLEY
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 15-05-2011
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Certainly a nice intro to mix with! Bit slow to take off, nice clean samples and mixdown, very impressive mate, like the percussion too just needs to be a tiny bit louder imo. Bass sounds gooood.
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02-06-2011 23:31 |
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amptek
Jan Amparo
Registration Date: 04-08-2010
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Thanks Skinley!
So boost the drums a bit more huh? Ok i'll take that into consideration 
Also, i'll up the BPM so it's a bit faster but I did it that way so the DJ's can do it on their own 
(lazy)
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03-06-2011 00:29 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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That kick is too deep for DnB, it's more a hiphop thing. A DnB kick needs to be more snappy to hit through sub bass sounds.
Love the vibe you've put in there.
Intro is too long/repetitive.
Like the drop, good bass. When the bass hits you kant hear the kick because it is too deep.
The bleepy melody is of tone.
Tune lacks stereo on a lot of elements, ony the piano hits really have (very wide) stereo which sounds a bit weird. There's a pad-ish element that needs stereo as well. The non-sub part of the bass could do with a little bit of stereo too.
Levels: break percussion is too silent, snare could use a bit more.
Tune has potential for sure, needs work.
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04-06-2011 20:17 |
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Subkinetik
Cupid Stunt
Registration Date: 24-04-2009
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cant give much comment cos battledrone has summed it all up in a nutshell once again. good track tho.
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05-06-2011 02:06 |
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freddy reeks
break yo self foooo
Registration Date: 10-02-2010
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Seemed pretty standard till that sik bass kiked in, The shaker was well needed 4 the beats, maby anothe percussion element or 2 4 the beats. Wikid vibe but not finished imo.
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08-06-2011 23:02 |
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