Razorcut
Producer
Registration Date: 04-08-2004
Posts: 19
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Please check out my new track 'Dark Agony' and post your comments here!!!
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06-08-2004 19:10 |
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Surya 
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
Posts: 11,238
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Bassline is good, but re-EQ it a bit. Like give it a bit more sub and a bit less bass.
Amen sounds really lo-fi, it really needs work to make it sound a bit clear and pumping, coz it's just a lot of mid now.
Switching with the stepbreak is a bit leap too, coz it sounds sooo different. Thisone does sound crisp and all and doesn't have a lot of mid too it... So work on the sound of the amen, and work out this transition better.
The female vocal is really nice, and does fit with that bassline quite good.
The whole track misses a sub, so it sounds a bit flat, and some parts sound a lot better (soundwise) than others, so work on making it all sound more equal.
2.25/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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09-08-2004 13:21 |
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hedset
Producer
Registration Date: 23-06-2004
Posts: 95
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im an amen fiend, but this one sounds too "mono" besides the disco drop, you should add some subbasses in it too, i could think of a few 
this one could be made better
i gives it a 2
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12-08-2004 05:33 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
Posts: 643
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Dont like the wow. the rest is quite ok. maybe a reverb on the trumpet's in the beginning. first bass synth sounds too lo fi. the phone effect on the loops should be left out from now on. bass sounds is quite deranging. pitty about the beats. try variotin in the loops and your own beats. second break s quite good but the wow!!!! female vocals give me a .... ... . bass sound adjustments and the phone effect then more female vocals. and a nice Eq on top. Could be much better
1,5/5
cheers
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muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
reggeadubwise.com
Roots-reggea-project: muphsteppa
muphsteppa@reggeadubwise
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