 Razorcut - Traümerei |
Razorcut
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Registration Date: 04-08-2004
Posts: 19
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Please check out my new track 'Traümerei' and post your comments here!!!
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06-08-2004 15:38 |
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Surya 
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Nice n shoft track.
Work on your levels a bit though, some things stick out, some are hardly noticable, and volume seems to vary (I know it doesn't) thru out the track.
The track is quite allright, but it has nothing to it to make it stand out.
2.5/5
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09-08-2004 13:16 |
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AcidMonkey
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Registration Date: 01-09-2004
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Nothing overly wrong with the track but it does seem to just 'sit in the background' if you get my meaning.
Are those trumpet/sax samples filtered? I'd take the filter off or if not EQ them to bring out the upper/mid range and make them more noticable.
The bass seems to be panned somewhat to the left, nothing wrong with that but generally people mix bass centre as otherwise it can 'unbalance' the mix.
I like the lead synth line but if you could make it more cutting and agressive maybe it would contrast with the smooth rolling nature of the rest of the track and add more depth?
Bit of EQing n stuff could really bring out the best in this.
3/5
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03-09-2004 12:24 |
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Soi
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Registration Date: 29-01-2003
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yeah, definitely work on your levels: drums and bass more upfront, sax and synth's more to the back.
Maybe you could try and alter the bass-sound although it's quite good from 2:30 onwards.
It sounds to me that you did a pretty good job with the ingredients that you had, simple but effective track with good use of limited amount of samples/lines.
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03-09-2004 13:20 |
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