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Razorcut
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Registration Date: 04-08-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Bullying' and post your comments here!!!
06-08-2004 15:26
Surya Surya is a male
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44 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 9.27

Intro is ok.
Drums are OK, but put the snare a tad more up front. Same goes for the hats.

Bassline is quite allright. A bit more hi end would be nice though, to make it sound clearer.

Some of the vocals are a bit... hmmm... dunno... I just don't like some of them. And there are too many.

House buildup is good, but the drop after that doen't have the impact it should have.
Switching between the themes could be a bit better too. Just fading in and out isn't very sophisticated, is it?

Gets a bit repetetive after a few minutes too.

Not bad, but not very good either. With some work it could be really nice though

2/5

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09-08-2004 13:10 Homepage of Surya
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Registration Date: 31-08-2004
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I like the overall sound, but I'm a bit overwhelmed by all the different vocal samples, especially in the first part of the track.
I do like the atmosphere of the sound in the beginning
keep it up!
31-08-2004 23:46 Homepage of DeclineD
AcidMonkey AcidMonkey is a male
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Generally lacking some top end clarity - are you using 22kHz samples throughout? Or is it just the final mixdown?

Maybe you could add more top-end 'sparkle' by programming some high hats in time with those in the drum track and overlayering.

Some nice bits in there, just needs some good EQ and compression to make the various bits sit together more and add definition to the sounds.

The 'mo-fo' sample seems totally pointless though.

Keep up the good work.
02-09-2004 17:25
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