shir_pan - Remember Love |
shir_pan
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Registration Date: 01-02-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Remember Love' and post your comments here!
a current project, first time i actually been workin with a vocal-sample...
what do you guys think? thx for advice
__ http://soundcloud.com/shirpan
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21-05-2011 15:26 |
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mattyb
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HAs a real "hurt You" "Tear You Down" vibe to it. Definately a roller. Bass could be brought up a bit. IS there an Amen hidden in there? If not i think one would help.
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21-05-2011 15:30 |
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SKINLEY
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Registration Date: 15-05-2011
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Liking it, sounds tight. Not a firm believer of giving the bassline away before the drop, but it still sounds pretty sweet! Tiny bit tinny but nothing a bit of mixdown and mastering can't help. A little repetitive, try a bit more variation on the bass riff. Keep going with this one man, has great potential. Drop me a review and comment on my tracks if you can too man.
Peace
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21-05-2011 15:53 |
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tryptech
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Nice liquid feel, vocals fits in well, love the energy in this one great man
respect
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22-05-2011 17:15 |
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Subkinetik
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drrums roll nicely, nicely brought into the build up. classic build up except it could have built the tension up a little more. not sure if the filtering on the drums work for me but thats just my opinion. maybe it would work if you had some kind of sweep to fill the silence up a bit. i also feel like the track is lacking sub. try boosting that sub bass up.
the vocal samples fit well. nice job there.
not sure what to say about variation, never really been a bit fan of liquid dnb. nice job tho, keep at it.
__ WWW.SOUNDCLOUD.COM/SUBKINETIK
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22-05-2011 18:25 |
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Really cool break to start off with, and nice intro overall.
awesome freakin vocals you got goin on too.
The bass is really nice.
The drums are high energy and exciting.
I really like almost everything about this song. Although the structure could be improved just a bit, by adding a slightly toned down breakdown that brings emphasis to some of the less used parts in the song. then blast it back in with everything you got.
Other than that, the song is pretty sick. maybe try a little distortion on the melodic synth that comes in at 1:31.
9/10
__ Most recent track:
http://soundcloud.com/drewtweedymusic/unwashed-grapes-v2
Go to http://www.Youtube.com/drewtweedymusic to hear my stuff!
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24-05-2011 16:56 |
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