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mattyb 
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Please check out my new track 'New One (small Clip' and post your comments here!
Here is a small unmastered clip of something i literally just started. Diggin it, just not sure what to do with it.
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21-05-2011 02:33 |
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SKINLEY
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Nice bassline, not sure what you should do with it tho man sorry!
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21-05-2011 02:44 |
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tryptech
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Nice, think the bassline can be wide in the mix, and can use little more sub, just add some smalle elements to keep it interesting, could be drumwork or so
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21-05-2011 09:18 |
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sAv
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hehe, i have about 20songs over 1,30min and no idea what to do next. but ok, back too your track, first i thought its about jumpUp but if this very warm bassline hit in i was realy surrprised. bassline is a good clean sound (i knowing of no mastering), that is pushing from background. the overall sound is ok except the hats, i think a bit high or low pitched will work good. more often i repeat the song, for me, after this 1.26min, a crispy, high pitched blip, what formed a simple melody, maybe in use of a voice, will good work together with that bassline.
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21-05-2011 10:52 |
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mattyb
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yeah i was thinking of some bleeps and blips and what not. I also have like 50 just started tracks that end up being forgotten.
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21-05-2011 13:47 |
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mattyb
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22-05-2011 16:30 |
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Subkinetik
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needs a little more sub on it. i wouldnt know what else to do with that either cept maybe a few drum edits and a change of notes, maybe some bleepy type sound effects, like you said. i know what you mean though, i have about 50 or so 60 second track and about another 150 10 second loops.
try listening to some other neurofunk tracks on youtube to get ideas. i do that a lot
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22-05-2011 18:18 |
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Really nice bassline. Like really freakin nice.
You did a really good job on the overall mixing quality i think.
Although the drums need a lot of work, the kick does not have enough punch (pardon the pun) and the snares sound muffled.
Try EQing the kicks and snares until they punch through the mix and show off their own flavour. Maybe try a cool effect on the snare.
You did a really good job with the bass though, the melody and wobbles and even the mix is really nice, like i can hear the sub bass separate from the main wobble even with mediocre headphones. very nice job.
8.5/10
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