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tryptech 
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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19-05-2011 22:00 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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I hear great potential!
But it needs to be polished.
The sub needs some envelope added to it or some very little wobble to make it more alive.
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19-05-2011 23:30 |
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tryptech
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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Originally posted by BattleDrone
I hear great potential!
But it needs to be polished.
The sub needs some envelope added to it or some very little wobble to make it more alive. |
Thnx man, yess early stages
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ANALOGUE (Tryptech)
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19-05-2011 23:32 |
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BBear
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Registration Date: 18-08-2010
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Drums are nice, bassline is soothing but way to loud on my monitors. Vocals are nice, synth works well.
This will probably become a very nice tune, but it needs some work, especially on the mastering.
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20-05-2011 14:17 |
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SKINLEY
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Registration Date: 15-05-2011
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It certainly is a roller, not sure about some of the fx but the vocal is cool. sometimes the old piano sample sounds too out of tune but overall nice start
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21-05-2011 02:23 |
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Subkinetik
Cupid Stunt
Registration Date: 24-04-2009
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not sure if it was intentional but the notes dont seem to sound right. not sure if its the pad in the background throwing me off. it might be that piano as skinley said. also the drop is lacking something, not sure what. apart from that i cant put my finger on what this track needs. good job overall though, really like the use of the vocals.
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22-05-2011 18:31 |
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shir_pan
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 01-02-2011
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great vibes, awesome lyrics. drums sound good. piano fits great. huge potential in this tune, go on workin on this! only thing thats kinda disturbing me is this stab-synth, the melody doesnt really seem to fit the vocals imo.
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25-05-2011 13:07 |
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