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BattleDrone 
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Compression is way too much at some points and ruins the whole thing.
Do you hear the drums fade away in the intro? It's because of the overcompressed basses, the drums are almost inaudible.
(e.g. at 4') the midbass is so compressed and so wide that the drums are pushed away. Make some room for the drums, DnB is at least 50% about drums.
Tune has a lot of potential, but not with this mixdown.
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10-05-2011 13:25 |
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gripz
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tnx battledrone 
that totaly got past me.
i got myself studio monitors and everything just sounds so clear 
, i still have 2 get used 2 that .
i'v already made some adjustments 2 it and it should be good now.
dunno if it's ok 2 upload multiple version. i noticed last time that was a bit unusual 2 do.
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10-05-2011 14:08 |
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Impact
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10-05-2011 14:17 |
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amptek
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Very funky stuff here Gripz!! The drums are really nice until the main synth and meloldy come in. Ready for some criticism??!!
The instruments, pads, synths kinda overpower the drums which isn't bad if you were going for that. The drums could be boosted a bit but that's just my opinion.
Overall I like the tune and your idea. Well made!
amptek
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10-05-2011 18:44 |
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tryptech
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Has a good vibe man, the whole is maybe little to compresse love thet eerie synth in the back, would distort the bass that much
sounds full and deep
well done
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10-05-2011 22:28 |
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Spectral Pace
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Like the musical progression. Just sounds like a lot of sounds are fighting for space. Your arpeggio sounds like it's panning which is quite distracting. You also need to vary the melody. Try adding a different section just to spice things up a bit. The beat sounds like it is getting totally drowned out also. Other than that, I think the idea is good. All the best.
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12-05-2011 14:15 |
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shir_pan
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drums are a little swallowed by the other stuff, i would bring them up more. nice piano at 1.31, thou it sounds a little "contrary" to the other sounds u used. from 3.04 on its too much at once imo. melody becomes a little repetitive after a while, but "sound" itself is good imo (thou not really my taste). i would focus the track more on those pianos i guess 
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12-05-2011 15:57 |
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gripz
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thank you all for reviewing my tune.
i'v been working on it using your comments, and i think it turned out great.
i'll be uploading it in a few hours or tomorrow depending on when i can upload again.
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12-05-2011 18:03 |
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