miki
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Registration Date: 10-06-2004
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Please check out my new track 'in the solid cube' and post your comments here!!!
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04-08-2004 23:08 |
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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Second snare that kicks in is a bit too loud.
Bassline would be cooler with a bit distortion and some filterin to give it more dynamics.
Not very intresting track, it's just a bassline, some drums and some effects, no real story or something to make it stick out.
1.5/5
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05-08-2004 22:01 |
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thechronic
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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You're doing great stuff with the pulsating sound effect, but the track lacks a good hook imo.
And there's a lot of weird stuff going on in the low end, those pitching basses, very original, but not really catchy if you know what I mean.
The kick is a bit too clicky imo, and the snare is too loud. The track is also fairly 'empty' frequency wise, there's hardly anything in the mid.
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27-08-2004 01:06 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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very weird basskick experimental tough. side effects are pretty cool. snare should be a bit more in front. the overal levels of the sounds arent quite that. snare s much better in the second part but beat needs more variation. back noises mùore upfront. you need more sounds and noises . it sounds like a nice base but just that . no finishing. complete and eq.
2/5
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